【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
( u9 N- r  t* |From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
/ ~4 R4 q. a: ~/ b* oBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
3 p5 V  \& U; _* ^, HIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
3 Y/ g2 y* x6 z  B! w3 p* sLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 f# i; W5 f9 I9 e/ V) d6 @I want to confess that I love you,
7 K2 D+ v: H! R2 Z% x8 f9 ]$ d; lBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
5 @- `2 o1 d' D& u: OI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" N- O  m7 b9 u) t7 _1 DLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
% y( T3 z* [* y' }. l& |! DI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- o; F9 Q7 i; U% u9 l% \If today isn’t too late,
7 l5 k, N- S& V0 e: @0 bI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
2 l/ q1 j- ~# wEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
8 l) L0 _" I% U/ p5 |. d4 c9 m: M" jEntrust my love within your heart
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. z6 P/ n9 S& D- C  V0 s3 J[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
! h2 |# `( j. r/ K* ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* \  r* ^! ^" D6 ~6 k<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
4 {) Z( X4 C9 _* d! I9 v, l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
) J8 }9 Q7 J0 m! |/ U* `3 Y<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
  F1 |4 p2 ]8 m<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
, x( h/ p3 m4 v9 V& e* Z; A<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 x; P+ W* ?/ t4 s% d! D$ B6 ]8 Q<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
" @; z/ Y: _4 ^<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
: t) f$ v$ _5 R<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& _& ~3 l/ h- t8 H7 g<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
9 J* J2 `2 H8 I+ L  \; T" m/ R<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ G* K* l* `( v& N1 E7 V4 k1 M$ D<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
* y* V& A2 e3 e0 P; A& _/ E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ Y9 K$ E) ]1 s<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. `! b' L# B6 t  j* w1 O<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 c6 ?. ]) _2 _# O9 w0 n0 p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
, o3 z: _! q: M0 E9 }- g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) P0 ~5 X. v3 a5 z, v( a% S' F+ Q<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  J5 I  o/ S+ A9 m( r  \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- p" D# a3 [; l+ |6 p<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) ~+ |- m, d% I9 _<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
& S+ R9 S# G& g" C<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 M* U' v5 t& l' f( e<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
! G1 u! X& m* {" s0 K5 |) A<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
0 E: W% H4 N7 H, @* t7 n8 U1 h2 g<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
; z  h8 A6 h- ?# g3 b: x<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 o7 J+ y- g7 e) O<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
5 I$ `+ g% a8 X- e  n& v7 V$ O<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
7 U$ F3 g6 L7 y2 B<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: u4 n6 r( E7 q8 K4 d0 ^3 ]<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
8 x  W, U6 o: h' H4 x* r<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, o3 d3 d: [" d  |  h这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( K' m2 r; |1 A<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>