【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
6 k1 a# @- {8 Z" E! h- H! tThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
- f* J- ~# i0 I2 \2 {% [5 gWe meet and talk everyday,
, H3 i, m5 `7 k: E; r& NBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
, w& @1 g; f! A6 w8 qI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
4 ~) N( R+ R4 {8 J2 {! @I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
5 e6 l  E. m! b0 NCan I entrust it to you?
. S* S( L& ~8 b% F3 x+ T2 _Entrust my love within your heart
! x0 Y4 p& y6 N9 f1 @Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
# S! t1 q3 g( p' I+ }  |0 t9 VI want to confess that I love you,
5 j- S: q/ ~0 L& TBut I never did
1 W7 l5 J4 f$ j; h* T( WOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ }/ s0 r) m' RCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
) q0 e: o$ T; P& `. CEntrust my love within your heart
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2 P& H# L. n8 f" W+ S2 Y% d4 c[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
- D+ l, c3 B: O<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
' ^; A9 L9 O6 P<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
4 ?) j% U( ^7 x  E: r<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% X2 K( a% l4 l2 Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
7 D4 F) P3 n4 E/ C- Y<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
  F/ z* d9 `1 X4 b0 K<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
8 e( ]+ ]9 P0 d8 W3 f9 P6 m3 D<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
) s: L9 N% r6 l  x/ K: }2 C! X<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 k# d8 o5 l$ T% w4 K<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' g0 q- B4 L9 T0 p! o<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
0 s) P( Z* D) w& u; }4 ]: A3 Q<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, F( e' R6 u& Z* d0 P) k& v& \9 N, ]" h<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 n8 U- i6 L- t<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
- Y. l: K9 d' ]3 \$ @<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
" t) D0 U3 @  P$ P# o# J$ Z2 ?<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 l  k/ s5 k" B" D: l<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
, M+ H% s- |4 N0 `* R/ h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
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<P>Love… just the word love </P>
9 \* P2 Z6 Y& R+ d% ]6 z. N* h<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
' M1 T* e( ]6 L<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
* U; h' |3 d( y3 r& X* g" ]<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
  ?# I. e; \0 X  L<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
$ ]6 Z& S7 T0 [  _5 V" i4 k<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( _5 o( q1 R7 ^, a<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
" @& ?% C& A8 A) O' }<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 ?2 f; F- V: J& i+ i+ w( @<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
3 L1 b% K6 F, h8 A0 A" z2 ]8 Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% [$ h6 [# C$ B<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ l; z9 s% e- ]<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
, r; H  M7 K9 X<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
7 r% n: j: n6 W  ?  |* g<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

+ E8 J# k& O, l+ u: ? 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

4 @0 R  i2 ?9 m# ^  Z: h7 z4 S这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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: H7 z" O+ m2 a. G- k/ t+ g<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 o# P7 V2 X+ d6 `2 h<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>