【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
0 I' Y* t/ |' uThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
/ F& R0 o4 d7 B# ^6 TI already loved you with all my heart
/ \+ h( {; e# i4 |8 f- }We meet and talk everyday,
2 f- E6 F3 M0 u$ e; n& mBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
) |/ Z# M( Z' }9 t! K) wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) |+ y. g1 T; nI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- S/ S% ]0 [9 L/ ?9 \Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
) l+ d1 F) l1 m4 JBut I never did
& e. \' J6 ?9 @' ~0 i) ROne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
3 }! r  f( `. U3 C$ j3 a0 fIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' t. J4 m4 _1 OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
8 S. v- O- S( {& Z( |8 FCan I entrust it to you?
# {! B; {: V8 U$ [0 J; u8 v. w. s) kEntrust my love within your heart
! X" |' s2 }1 R! Y* H, i. KLove… just the word love
! V' A) Z" Y$ K, m, ^3 RWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 P, L' q4 z1 @* P0 c6 U$ ~- dIf today isn’t too late,
2 {- b  G0 @2 p0 UI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
+ O! r3 k6 t# C5 SEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
3 l0 j- U* k+ r* a* k  MEntrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 D6 C2 n4 E  u3 X<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
) Q- F9 F" |( ^4 C9 e<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
/ X0 D& @! o5 Y) [- N" b1 @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
+ o1 u$ g# W; O<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
5 }* D$ }: R, |6 |: U2 V0 y+ ~<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
& B& r" t- t1 U' G. z7 C<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
" ]! x# r, e8 @<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
- ]' H0 L& O" A<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 \; C' _# @6 n. r5 b- O<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
  }1 V  [3 U# [$ z9 x, o5 q; R<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& f, ~+ n# C2 k5 U<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 ]2 X5 v8 V% G, K<P>但我不会</P>
$ D' O" f6 w; s8 o, g0 s2 E<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
6 |# M' _; @1 M8 U* K<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
' f( A0 C6 F+ F5 g$ T( s) R6 \<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 Y  t: [, U9 F" r0 q: X* a<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' p- b0 h; F) V4 E<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
; T5 p9 W+ m# {5 ^* ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
" O! W) |- U: H) W/ F# }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
! w  a1 ]% I6 l<P>But I never did </P>
# f  y+ v9 P% @8 [2 }8 D# k<P>但我不会 </P>
: P. h  y5 G: c9 Y; L8 f<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 e, P5 p( x* w+ A% t6 k5 [* j, t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
% k9 z5 j4 \0 I- e  w8 X# j, z<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* x9 M7 r+ b3 G, r; P' `  F7 j<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
2 S! c# g) u% y! [1 y. B5 m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* e$ Q, U! }  m# L8 j' s<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
2 ]* m: k- g; ?2 {6 D+ ^<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
$ v8 N+ F- u0 ]$ ^8 Y, d  F  [<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) e5 `! o. Q3 A+ t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
/ Q) U7 U2 v! j# D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
% v" o. z# i2 u<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 Q. _0 Y- h% N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
& M4 f9 ~% J* _* X<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
2 K  v" r5 @0 T: O<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>