【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
( }* Q8 _+ N, W7 yThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
+ H& }8 p" D8 G4 D: k1 iThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
! V' e0 s8 b; }# @" XFrom the first moment we met,
0 L% o0 U. i$ x- V( SI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
- E) o* l9 ?6 F* f  w9 ^But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
8 g$ d! N* {2 i/ P8 k; \7 bIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" w: ?& E9 B* C$ N  i: P/ x" cI would probably know how you feel
4 D/ R( A+ F" U" ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
  }$ F* Y5 a- s" LBut I never did
% N! i" w) f. B: {. Y/ eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
6 O( E' r) w' I# Z2 N" e  w7 y0 T, HIf today isn’t too late,
* d1 l8 d4 `# K9 a' j' C+ q0 ZI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 ~/ X  l. H0 ~+ D  BCan I entrust it to you?
$ j# j( b+ L6 A4 q/ r; \" YEntrust my love within your heart
' a$ v5 P1 d8 n/ wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. r1 ~8 c8 j5 C  j. N2 eOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" E" K, P) _2 a1 ^If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
1 v! |2 ^" N% B* u) I$ f9 Y( u& bCan I entrust it to you?
& e/ O% \2 P, K6 h% ^7 {* d: ?* ]Entrust my love within your heart
0 S7 `0 D- F: _6 \+ m4 p1 rCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

; \6 i" ~: r5 }6 H[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
" U' M) C$ d8 ^  E$ r. w# G<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
9 b3 n% _' ^1 R( W/ r$ p6 U<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
# D# @2 C- G5 h1 a- p# ?<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
2 ~, X0 B$ C+ B* U& S: D; i<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  u" _/ W! T$ v7 l. [<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
. s+ O8 Q$ u; @: l; g& X<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
; y+ J3 U. B" I6 g; R1 t- o. v<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
. _6 r% H* V; ?- w! e! `/ P<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
% h7 ~! |" o/ h2 C% G4 Z<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
' n) ?  L$ L  n; F<P>我想说我爱你</P>
" a7 H' C+ @: O( A5 z<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
" T/ d$ N: c2 h$ V, t3 y! E/ c<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& @- X8 W  ~/ K- I<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
$ w; n/ Q6 b8 q1 B4 A4 m* M<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
4 i* b2 w5 ^1 s+ O8 C6 [) y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ M. L! z8 v' p3 l4 [<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
% A7 P% ]) P& n- O: {9 a<P>Love… just the word love </P>
: x" o% A& f# D<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
' D9 O1 W/ a$ `<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
. C. k. P6 `5 y1 M% o<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
* u7 v, H; E9 X3 x' V5 ~: Z1 c<P>但我不会 </P>
% t, a. \5 ~/ V! K<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
, ~# O, p) `7 M; J) `<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
, A* V/ C/ i' }1 _+ J<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
6 u" O# Q+ d# P! ^3 m; U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
  [/ }1 z$ n+ k<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 v) \  H& c: `: G* q. I) z<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
! C; j$ t6 a% n7 X# @% e<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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4 h8 D1 L. x2 Y4 C0 W( M4 x" h; d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>