【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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# q2 Q. q. y& z& B2 O我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
' w9 ^2 z3 O2 k; A: H3 iFrom the first moment we met,
0 b- U! ~% i" |8 V* z6 VI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( Q/ e0 ^- [7 KI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
" L" Q8 Z$ u% {8 dI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
" n- I4 W# U$ C3 G' \If today isn’t too late,
- _* P+ J9 {& |* sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
) n& X; v6 d: L7 B( A5 }! TLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 z  ~: B3 u( |1 w  l& HIf today isn’t too late,
9 H$ r! {8 y( \1 M1 ~! F2 sI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* ]3 R! L, H1 mI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
; N( J! g4 o2 @: r! M  yEntrust my love within your heart
  R5 K& t/ L+ |8 y0 E% ZCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

* u1 z. |1 A' a$ B' ~[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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8 l# j  S2 {7 r. L3 ^) D  w/ [, k<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
+ i0 z) E. a6 y: o<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
5 f$ ]6 r' u# C' }1 |4 w0 ~<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
2 V. d9 V# T- l4 u% L9 @0 P<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
1 F+ V1 e4 F6 [$ d% K8 n" T3 I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
: B/ L4 v+ l# t& a<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
; B$ s& p2 r0 B0 x" P, q0 p4 c<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
5 a! v, D- R1 i<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ G, F( h7 P4 w<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* k. x6 |# p' K; p! i) d1 Z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
. a) f$ F3 _/ k. I( d& F<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% e' F* @$ p$ M: K<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
: n: D3 y, w" {4 {5 M3 ^<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
( S7 N" j; i5 l<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* L% a  f9 F2 ~7 W<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. K$ H2 Y5 |! q/ Y! X<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
' j2 _' E% f* ^. Z/ ]% N<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
6 P$ x: b' r6 t& ~# H* r* h, i: s/ n6 u2 W<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; J1 q6 y3 ?5 j! r8 z3 X7 D, J8 `/ g<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
2 ]* H2 B- c8 z+ Z! k8 W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
" L" [# I" O- m* q6 h3 J9 i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
. I, M1 R- c( K1 Q8 |0 {<P>Love… just the word love </P>
) q4 u0 r- ~* F. X<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
: j% d( L! r% c' u/ {: U" C; H<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
/ e. G5 M. N4 O& i7 o  W2 U1 h<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
2 e* X# C2 M: w4 v6 r<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
% p3 H6 x' P9 F<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
% z" B2 v. b0 O2 u+ B" \( k; N; a<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ P8 b0 M; ]0 @0 J, N3 E<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 Q9 a0 [! I; o% g2 N<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 s% [8 ?0 r8 P- U9 P% o5 O+ d, X<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ a! ]" U" A2 T/ b  a4 ?# R% ~0 ^<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
+ t3 ]' w, w. p* R<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* U8 `3 Z  O+ y1 y& I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>