【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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. r4 E' q; j5 y% l我另将歌词附在此。
, I# e. K6 \2 V/ ]: q* MThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
' S) `9 P  Y, ^$ v0 AI would probably know how you feel
4 y" G  }( }& |0 uLove… just the word love
- z6 z# Q9 ~2 J# H# ~% a5 o! g& ^Why is it so difficult to express?
* N3 a, T; L' T! Q( dI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
6 N: }3 C1 p9 a, vOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ o; T4 X7 Y! {2 C0 B0 h* Z/ {If today isn’t too late,
1 P! w7 y2 D3 W  O3 B+ CI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
: T$ y9 J% g6 e& M& a# z9 V  yI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
4 P8 G( K5 L) n# lCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
1 p5 p) [$ y" t  s" K" G) DLove… just the word love
$ M0 ]1 B# I' W2 o" W2 f! x/ V) u' h  ~Why is it so difficult to express?
1 F, b2 x/ Z2 [3 m. n8 ]' pI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
1 a6 a* q& n: g' d* M: DIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  Y* u/ {. |; i) p3 [, lCan I entrust it to you?
/ a" A1 F2 n, J  IEntrust my love within your heart
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( g3 w; k5 ?2 w* ~. T[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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! U) i5 _8 K- e) o3 F7 q; Q! |( p<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" G" P$ `1 j. J+ H9 x<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
5 M# y' E6 J# ]* T  H<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
/ ~( u6 F( D; T<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
* [, i& `- h, [, U/ W/ O- {<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
  \) c) K5 q& c3 U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& z( M  ]. ^6 ]. M* _<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
# U6 v% A$ H. u6 Z& U0 q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
1 b- G. z7 M, v: o' e+ l<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
- P8 N) d( N" `1 N% {% e2 ?7 T, T<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
! B1 N7 }  s* {<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
8 q+ j$ m4 a2 Q3 }<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
: q* ?% J7 Z" W) U  ~6 K5 D  j<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
9 I) I2 o4 y  u" T<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
" ?- R9 N0 Q# t3 i9 q- d; ?<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 S  G! m- a. C) M; b- e# o. R<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
1 n, `" w7 c7 k$ q8 o9 k3 Z; ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( g# _( v7 R2 U. W+ [  p<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 ?1 I& V: p* ]0 s<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
" w8 t6 k1 U! c  Q$ L$ S* a& }1 H<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
# Q9 b8 |6 T+ E1 c8 K<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
: k3 Y- ^4 N. O! l0 f5 m<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
2 C/ |3 @  w' q! ~: h5 c. I$ c) P<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
0 v. G1 B5 H: ^4 ?* f* w+ H" }. h" t<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
; W& S2 x4 \% A  O<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% \1 ?  I, z, a2 N' f<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
8 C# |7 Z7 I6 Q6 F- Y' e) F<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& K( ~4 ?* c5 p) q' K<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; f3 t8 }2 w) P7 |( a) c  x8 t<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; P! G+ Z9 A; s6 P5 @" C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
9 j8 }* {( c/ F<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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3 s5 X. S* K% A: a8 N% s0 |这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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3 d' y+ g, ?) }* |$ q7 X<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>