【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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( V& j" y4 a+ t8 L' k+ H, V1 @我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
; u# g- K3 C/ t$ [8 VI already loved you with all my heart
' ^8 p! g  \! y) F* q9 _' S2 HWe meet and talk everyday,
7 m* n* F* h. N8 ~But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
/ _3 R5 _/ }6 h% M' Z4 E- Y+ w/ }If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( i6 G& g# q( f) m, G$ G& i) a8 SI would probably know how you feel
8 w' h0 f! o7 {3 j8 ]0 BLove… just the word love
# D* x' Q/ e! T& d: n+ }$ I" wWhy is it so difficult to express?
. ~9 c. O! n/ d, dI want to confess that I love you,
6 ^+ G3 K0 I6 D% |4 p. R' I8 K7 }But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ X7 I% q  e; x' P) xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
# Y' e8 T  ]$ A; ~Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
$ q9 [7 r0 s- R) f7 E) AOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
: e8 k+ i1 {( `# W$ NIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
# m' g# R2 ~8 bI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ u* x% m# y+ G" xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

! ~: s+ u8 Q/ u1 w[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

! @* j0 v( ^) q6 _0 C) i* s<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
9 g. ~6 |& O* Y& n7 P<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* e) l$ l& C5 F; Z6 p/ c<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
4 ~% ^* O6 n7 h7 a<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
& ]4 v& ]( W7 {<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
* D# y1 a; o0 T<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
  ?% j0 }2 h- J5 P" [/ g<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
" U8 g5 ?* O  t: T2 b<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
+ m' o' \7 k9 D! f& X<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
# M( j8 A* [  V& |5 G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
# ?9 S0 ]1 F# z% r7 \<P>但我不会</P>
, \5 u# C7 ]/ P<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
' D0 @: u1 S  R; Y; U<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- W) c- G7 u0 c) u' W<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
% D" C/ V' z# Z9 T0 p, [/ ]4 u<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
4 ]8 d8 t! Y" f6 X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
! {- P/ [3 J1 T9 U) M<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
5 w( J% Q# v% ~! n/ i* y3 Y<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
9 V& z8 _4 O# H<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
) F+ [# S1 ?' b, B3 s<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
) C  _' u6 i2 |/ {" d( X<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
- x- U' j0 h3 v' V3 \<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
* w% b- A: N* g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
+ C( K; i, @" N+ \, ]) b" p<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
  f- _5 a+ t: }<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 g& z: {! {5 J  g; S, }" p/ k7 X<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
1 D* v6 o% A( N5 b( h1 L<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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8 m+ I4 }4 q" \  A这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
0 c4 s( f- _/ D, q0 b, m  d5 v& H
这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- w2 U7 H; {; T* R, I  [; _/ L<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- U7 m+ f; w% I  f* W7 B; q<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>