【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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3 B: T, D5 t- A# |" `- E+ m我另将歌词附在此。
9 g+ m# C# C5 ~/ RThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
7 T* U2 J# ~: xI already loved you with all my heart
1 F) P1 h  X  a& \5 y6 dWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
7 I/ w7 r# {- `4 s# [I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 i: V& @/ K& O3 |If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
, Y8 J  d, |! K: t: nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
# ~9 h$ ?9 s) l$ b; TCan I entrust it to you?
3 t* _3 y$ e) L0 YEntrust my love within your heart
& Y% v& W) q  l7 lLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; z' i, a* m# ]; mI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
+ E4 B* h# l& u. C' OOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- n$ d" S, Z5 z" X- HCan I entrust it to you?
3 J( Q8 r6 C+ Q' aEntrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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1 F0 N; V1 c. l/ N/ X3 K9 n3 H( x<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
0 S, k' Q6 t% ]! r9 c( h2 _5 E" ~<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  @$ \) J' x7 |* P3 \: a. U<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  ?5 U+ h/ p7 g0 L: v<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
# o: _$ @# a# C" r, n" h7 g: I$ V3 t<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
/ y# n" t8 r& G- ?! Q<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
5 x2 U. G5 y* G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ t6 N7 J% {) ^! m" i9 ]<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 q1 F( Q: c' `' {0 E0 _5 S<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
9 f% e& y  M' G4 g, k% r9 S% n<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 X2 h5 C- Y+ A9 [7 F$ g<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
1 ]) p  C' B, S' b. T<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
& u+ K; _, f2 K! N, j# @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
8 q, \+ X7 a, T' v<P>但我不会</P>
5 s' G6 L" P  _! ?) C<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
. j. r! M7 S7 ?<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 {/ s) ?. E1 K8 f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
  o. `' X. p- w( v# ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( w5 l* b- J* Q1 M8 T( {<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: r! ]3 J4 f0 V+ t  a" t7 u<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" Y# }9 I- q4 p. x) B<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 U$ z" @' J. O2 e<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
) n# ]- @5 ~$ r<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
# x6 n& w- n% A% n; f9 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 ?! Y! D! o$ O7 ^<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) X4 Z2 L, l3 w/ d; i; W3 C/ ]) t<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
/ _3 k2 E% y6 R/ ]6 Z+ {- ?<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
0 S5 S0 P5 U( F<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
- ~  C4 T' f( L' s  r+ z; B<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
. B! S( |7 G; a1 _" c<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

- X2 e% |, h. ?, T- Z5 L这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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( |6 f+ R( K7 n" R# Y; o$ j<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>