【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
5 A; O$ H- I1 d% W+ a$ G& qThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 @& T; J- ]: I& P0 nFrom the first moment we met,
% d: }8 L7 ~4 o5 k' ]$ q, hI already loved you with all my heart
: P/ f+ Z& f+ L( w- IWe meet and talk everyday,
" E7 k* y) m( vBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
% ~5 w5 Z; @: u# ~' X' b3 w; _Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
. F6 O4 O# B7 R6 j$ @But I never did
( @7 M$ i3 A- u, v4 h. oOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
- W4 F9 m, h9 H: m* v. D4 ]If today isn’t too late,
( n) v' s5 s+ {+ NI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
/ \" L' w- Q3 q0 B& WLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
1 }3 u) i1 G2 ~8 MI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
# V; Q& Q( X, U9 l8 z! fIf today isn’t too late,
2 R, P9 O5 l: t4 KI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
9 X, j: {. {" t7 E8 e7 |- r+ nI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

- Z, M, F* z8 Z[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
/ H+ V* Y! x4 C+ A<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
$ Z' N' N3 o) b. i1 j; s<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
' h' q5 D& m( k7 C<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
* K1 C; v' w7 x8 t# L4 {# O+ e0 Z<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
$ `8 G% c' D2 p- E1 D& I<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
1 j& d' ^6 R5 L& K& f1 @<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
$ M/ B' x7 O( a0 _* O1 ?+ k* ^3 s0 S<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
6 q& m$ t% D! i2 @<P>我想说我爱你</P>
0 g; }- P, w* o2 b* h' k4 @<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 r5 _+ [9 o2 r( n8 M<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 _3 y) O2 ^, z% ?% t) a0 w! \7 L! o<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
% Q2 ^% u. u8 B5 x<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; `  Z0 P  w' I4 `* z! U6 o<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% v% Q3 }9 Y- L) q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  D/ c( C0 i. ~- F* Q& i<P>But I never did </P>
. B3 {. R# Y- Z; G0 r/ S$ L3 Y<P>但我不会 </P>
5 n$ y/ n3 j7 ~7 i# ~& H9 g2 D: J<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
& n1 Z+ ~/ @! I; X9 Q<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
& ~' x- S, U% }) _# p4 y<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 M' A7 v. {2 I: V' g<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
  ~" {$ R: {0 \9 o0 D5 T<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
4 H9 i, \& B) _<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
; s* p- u+ u, \<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
+ K6 P; F. K- J( i" d. j<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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  s/ ~6 ^: ?0 a7 i* v这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>