【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
: }$ ?5 y" k& h& J9 `6 [3 U$ RThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
/ Q# O& y9 q5 G" k8 w% mThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
9 ]+ G/ j) p+ ]  H5 sFrom the first moment we met,
( U) U. j3 z% y- ~I already loved you with all my heart
! q: i- [; S# XWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
% W! n& x) S3 ?5 Q! g  e. B2 gIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
. N% T- R: g6 Y+ n. y* d* t2 GI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
0 S  P/ Y) t5 D' P2 T3 h! o! MWhy is it so difficult to express?
5 g, ]. T& T% d& Y* ZI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
. I' U7 O% y6 M9 i2 uOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
! @( k5 \+ g* X9 C7 F/ g+ |1 x( mIf today isn’t too late,
8 W& ^- N5 W( ^I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
& t5 E/ G* G1 S$ F* D. SLove… just the word love
  ]* m$ a3 s. T! w- {$ XWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 W" f5 @! R+ h- SBut I never did
' w# P; U0 \, n& `; p. `One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
6 ]/ L7 ]2 k/ nI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
9 {, a* N7 I# O) t* IEntrust my love within your heart
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, N* J- z; W3 ]/ @- }3 y[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
* a3 c7 x! K" e/ I: S2 j<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! V) l  d0 _- ?+ \; a( x: R<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
8 X; b+ y8 w3 E, K: H+ n<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
% k  L1 i  w& @9 f5 e# E) d9 S* N8 s: m<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
. S. o5 w6 I, L, y. V1 Y1 v8 B<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
, q6 y& _$ `1 j2 }8 i<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
4 p7 T4 ^$ z& d! t<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
9 ~( y7 i9 N2 d: f  n<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
; E7 q6 [0 t  `. N1 A& X<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 Y1 R" ]. v+ M: X<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
2 f3 O0 n. ?+ V; D$ L5 K7 }9 {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
# y# |4 F. y5 y, F6 ]<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
% L; D8 L1 r; \4 l; q& U& j4 D9 f<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. H. o( l/ l3 Y: D; j6 O' p<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& J3 M$ [9 O) {# a5 A! ], |<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
) ^) w# z% t( k7 Y<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& w" z2 }" f! B; G3 t4 K% x+ y4 m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
! u5 e+ {! l7 J/ l5 A<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* x3 _# j( V/ {2 L8 W; `<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( g) c3 O7 N$ \7 z. U<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
6 m5 A9 g. }5 X/ a  k( I<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
4 X0 V* V. S, a" K) w* ?<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* V* F* S- e, p: j! N<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
) s: w+ f" K! i( m3 [- ^<P>But I never did </P>
0 l$ }! O/ v, |8 e& E<P>但我不会 </P>
, h( E: Z/ M2 a, H, W<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# _* o( ]- ^0 B% w7 ?<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
* a1 ]# r% o' P<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
/ a9 f* C* s3 i: ?$ T7 }1 y1 v<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
3 f4 k) Z8 @# J* m, `" N<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
& y8 A$ H1 X$ @9 {0 j( h5 q# u* I<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
4 z# ]2 B0 L  l- e) q% m" A* F4 N<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 E- z' h* k  Z" j4 }5 s: y<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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) G2 |0 K+ k5 d0 l* x( ^ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

7 w; Y2 m! Q8 i/ T( J这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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: k% k: x3 v7 F, d" H) _" b<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>