【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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8 q, q  a/ e3 O; |The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 f1 A3 L* X- z) v0 o. J7 u* S+ pFrom the first moment we met,
& z/ E, j$ t9 k0 o, `5 FI already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
0 e! R, Q+ I) A& }7 `But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
  C5 A7 P4 Z5 y' k3 f( P6 kI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
; u. d) S( P7 RWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
- V6 y- T0 Q7 M+ qBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
7 H% }) N' Z5 f9 M5 t8 i1 GI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
6 _2 U4 s: r; MI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
2 L5 l$ @; F1 UCan I entrust it to you?
8 \+ f3 v7 T% N1 GEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
0 D$ {# O6 V0 E6 g5 B0 s7 j" A) VI want to confess that I love you,
, y: j* ~9 }+ Z+ {But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
  p: b8 l( Z- Z% OI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
% S& {9 X, Y& @, i) DCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

. ~% {/ h' G: l) x: N  J[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

) ]4 w" R1 W5 {) P% J2 d<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
8 G! D9 O4 q/ ?% f$ L<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
- H8 M( f1 v8 z4 x' q<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
9 o2 q- E! ]$ V- C( {+ Z3 {1 E, H" C7 {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
: Y% T; D2 I, K5 j% S: Y<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
1 U) E5 J8 j* e/ T7 [) q/ q<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
3 ^. b7 Z/ v1 B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
9 W, X% j5 U% P5 z7 F<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
5 D  K) ~5 w" _<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
3 O8 f. a) K  x  |1 n<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
* ?8 _* Z# M+ A& J4 D<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
! N0 ?" o. g! [4 J<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
& D7 ]" |+ n" I+ f6 W7 n2 m<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
# X4 }" E; J+ ]6 B6 P4 o<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
3 D# P9 `( C+ i' C3 }4 `9 K1 ]' \<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 K/ ]; H9 r- S6 k* p<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
+ \6 Q4 o2 ?# q  ?& b6 ]9 `% j<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
8 q% V! Y( D, K5 O* M! p<P>Love… just the word love </P>
$ U* W2 k, F$ u7 H( O<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
1 U6 C! E, L5 R$ T<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
/ o0 V) h9 o( y: {+ @$ ?8 n$ }<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
( V, J3 [! a$ k: C<P>But I never did </P>
; \( n  v% H$ ^: q" v2 W<P>但我不会 </P>
& T7 N. j7 r7 G' ?+ h<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
4 |0 E. ~4 e% v7 c" c<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: x: u  J' ]6 i1 n<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
" x$ i5 t) P2 N' X) R" X% h<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
4 U8 R' @! H. i3 N. A& o<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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* M) f  K. i& N% a* ?4 L* @3 O( I这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

, m7 `' h$ y3 B1 Q: A7 F这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>