【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
4 p3 x8 O  [* w' J9 ^3 L) n% uThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
2 a: g# S# o  _  F; ]From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
' N# ~+ H# L' Y. o% `If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
+ W3 ]% m' B; @) Q8 v* RLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
- R! i& Y  F: ~  U+ n. C# U& T) II want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
+ j; v. J4 J) N/ m* O' v/ OCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
, [# d( B! n$ b5 M8 p1 Y  fWhy is it so difficult to express?
6 t) p; k& f$ e4 h: |  _I want to confess that I love you,
  n$ q8 I& W/ `# GBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
7 o) @) q; K, p2 m5 zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
6 s  w( Z: \* p: V, C9 t/ MCan I entrust it to you?
* [' P4 m0 n) {5 T) x) XEntrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
  B& f( S* F7 S: A$ A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
1 [7 S* s7 a  N9 U+ d+ g9 P3 f; f5 x0 C<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
  a; a+ ]1 ^! I; E0 r* G1 ^( ?2 T' B<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
8 F) _. K* K0 x5 T<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
8 K5 W9 ?$ ]5 i: a7 a# ^1 f- G8 e<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
# S* m* k) F; }' F# T<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 M7 I2 j- V- g<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
% Y# ]6 q5 V0 d<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
% h: B! p8 Q& Q  [<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# ?! J$ b- f: X3 u* p% b<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
; S! b' t. M& U# i<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
3 `5 o. F8 |6 V0 y( r" r0 x( N<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
! d, j4 V0 u' F+ d<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
# N1 p: E. q1 M8 T( ]. g3 C* m<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
% @/ s! k8 y1 ~2 q<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- z" F7 {$ |* B6 _0 w* o<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
# \/ k: A" ~8 k0 p' K; J: e$ Z9 C<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
- n( E5 w/ ~( L: {$ P8 }<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
3 L% t8 E7 a6 }<P>Love… just the word love </P>
8 |2 f( Y& C5 P<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
  ~2 b, y# u1 A<P>But I never did </P>
3 y7 w) M0 }; G# W  V7 s# o: @6 i" o<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
: Q: o  M3 Q. p0 m1 b* S# x1 U<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
6 N; n; h8 S$ Z% [" ?/ T$ T<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
" R3 _2 c& j5 U+ _0 }<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
+ M7 t8 R- s3 f% U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
* A" L8 K2 u/ p5 j# y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# W" S+ x' w( H; p# _0 {% Q<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
1 w: s5 i7 `1 v( a$ i! f; D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
1 F( @  E5 t# h<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
0 O# M/ A; `1 ^<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 Z" @) q9 y" G, W 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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* ]9 ?$ N4 n* c* y: S* P" s<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>