【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
- L! K% U4 [( j6 Y# [The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
8 [$ h4 R# j0 Y' A* t! RFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
- L9 @, C. b. |' ?: \* nWe meet and talk everyday,
7 S5 V2 r- L3 gBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 C; D& |+ o6 Y% y. UIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 }: U  O, o8 sI would probably know how you feel
8 H4 V3 |1 J* W, L0 x. ~# g; ZLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
; Y: ^5 v0 Q" l& Q4 ~& YI want to confess that I love you,
1 `# ~: V9 q3 u$ \0 WBut I never did
; z5 U$ j5 B# g: [' c) hOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
3 {' r$ Y: c! z  c1 S7 h( @" _' _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
! o9 @& a  O4 _' a; r' R/ J; WLove… just the word love
( V5 i. y; T! m( q# q7 Y$ qWhy is it so difficult to express?
: T6 n- ?! n& P2 iI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
0 i+ i" \7 r; TOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Can I entrust it to you?
+ a% S. \( G) e; a# u% BEntrust my love within your heart
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) d' ^, }# }! ^$ A: U[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' B- |# ]  a2 O7 q, J) b<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
/ M1 W% i+ w) k. J/ z2 g' J<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
! [  c- J4 x4 G& C5 V& |) B<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
0 t- I! P8 z# G- `9 g% v' q# @<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
/ L* T) J) M7 N: G<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
$ ]9 U, A0 Z8 C* y  ~0 s0 t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 u! X5 P3 T/ ?7 P<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
, f5 Y7 ?( u. l) f, o<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
# j% X5 [  `; o! g5 @; u$ i<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
8 w& L. d0 i% x  G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
) N. _: T) o0 H! ?<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
  n1 E1 m" }- t<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
% D& {- u) j' E' y, @<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
* {! H  S6 f, u( t& N/ Q3 A- L<P>我想说我爱你</P>
; r8 H3 j/ d7 V9 d+ ^<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
, J" Z/ u& d* c2 E" G3 e& Q<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
) a  O/ p6 J! [. V! v! w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
' F# |- s+ i6 _2 Q- o9 y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
) ^5 E7 q- o% c2 M' R. |* I<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 v6 U5 X2 D" f<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
( G: J6 @4 [, Y- d8 J<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
+ ^7 Q$ V+ Q( H: d<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
# V, K1 J; L# v$ F<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
: a1 C2 e" V. a' ~8 {<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
& I" o0 h+ Y, U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ g, O9 `- [0 I* k8 b  ?<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- W$ V5 |6 P( Q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
( ^5 w' |7 _8 ]/ m<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' ~3 [3 F# s( B+ P这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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) Q7 _" C5 q; _+ G5 K<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>