【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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* H( Y- f3 K& \7 s我另将歌词附在此。
5 A2 ~# ~% T  n0 j& z. WThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 {* @2 J. d% jFrom the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
; z6 A# J2 T8 P, k* bI would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
6 k. d0 x  K" ~6 B0 \1 U! dWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
* j+ x6 i& n  Y; i/ bOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) M3 D7 p. b0 H; YIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
' _" Q1 L+ D' }) y$ YI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
% P; [- x7 p4 F! K+ X# y0 ^Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
+ V8 @0 L+ ?  O( q! p6 d1 aIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" O; ~+ _- L- wCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
7 S% [! S6 }/ \9 xCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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8 f- X# C4 V0 ?; h" \7 x[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
7 [1 g- o% X( b, A<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
" i: u- U3 V( n, E1 Y1 W  s8 N! O  U<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
7 [/ L6 m0 G1 T" Q# F, _, {<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
4 Y- {, Q1 V9 \! r! U8 H; S. T( _$ x<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
2 M) d% n. b; u* Q<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
4 t  ^/ v5 V& _1 R* X- s/ P<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
& Y; k, e- ?! Y( R<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
& W5 t  ?, X6 k5 I0 [" O! O/ C. U) e) P<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
" V( M9 P- s, ~) I- w5 ]* F<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
/ V9 A' A9 e" t; o4 |/ Z6 J$ K<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 X% l* c; B5 c2 u<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
! L  h9 @* U. B/ L( |. c* x<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
. n( b0 y3 c$ f& O/ M# c: [<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
! I# R, b& C- j  k, d<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
; A  r. Q7 m7 G' d: G' ?, p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
/ S: |) m4 n8 o# N4 {7 u% o<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
  a6 L1 S, t' \( Q% M% |<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
) X, y: l) V" h* M<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
) [$ _! O2 A; M$ Q<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
, S/ A/ Q# s# Z+ o: A<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
( c7 n( R+ N3 J<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
" _  O' W7 Y; g" P<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
  ]1 C& |" o% q. R( g<P>但我不会 </P>
1 J. R2 `5 g% z4 \+ [<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
/ y6 Q; x% N( v6 X  t3 m; |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
% Q; ^- l; I! P# s+ ~<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 \# B* j# f( s0 D$ `+ ^3 u<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
: e  P# U& p% ?3 @& x/ s<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 K) ^9 k( T5 g1 V5 T<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
! R6 A. w( j( v, w9 e! s<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
7 D( k1 q  `0 z<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
! t7 H4 i3 F: f  b4 p! [, B<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

. @. @  Z$ d( I" m  _: E% O 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

  c4 h" C# Z+ Z; x& l4 S# D* @! k这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

" D) K- v; V3 `  {/ w这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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1 S0 H1 l! K/ P4 e' I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>