【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- U) _4 n8 y0 ~. tThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
+ N$ F- D  `% K0 G& O! F; bI already loved you with all my heart
0 Z3 c) H9 v( g2 g' oWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
5 f8 Y+ `! S' z8 N5 ^/ z4 SIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
) y# X* w1 @) \8 lWhy is it so difficult to express?
' z! z7 ]& q/ Y1 K3 oI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
4 g% P7 R2 v- G' O2 dIf today isn’t too late,
" J& K3 z2 Y1 |0 {I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
6 j! v! V3 M: _6 z9 `0 J8 Y" S3 R5 tEntrust my love within your heart
# ]# n* A. B4 y( {Love… just the word love
# y) p2 L7 ?: r/ g) s. HWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* R# O7 q% d3 b5 X5 p6 t. PIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
3 g9 t5 ~  ?, l5 ~/ A  uCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
  ]& U; H7 O' J7 a% l9 |Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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( `6 f- ~1 @% @/ b/ Q[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
' [  C( C, _& z" y<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
; @6 p& \  I) E# h4 O) E<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
& v, N2 A' a2 v" R( D' n; Z* @<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
) S* f# I; v! g9 P* U<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
! T- ?" j% g4 d<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
- a/ t7 W" i% e9 i" r# }6 `<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
: s( V! d9 k1 T<P>我想说我爱你</P>
3 _1 H8 E% `/ l" L<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
- O: [+ U) C% W; G3 I* [<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
  t) o" \5 i# @<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
2 n8 U7 z8 d$ M' s) i5 f, c. w<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
2 }6 g" R" f- |: _, m<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
7 @/ F  J6 Q: i2 ]/ \; e<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
3 y3 }9 e' n; B5 n% H6 S: f<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
9 ], q/ R1 F8 A# E" X0 e% Y' k! A9 t<P>Love… just the word love </P>
1 U! _, i3 Z! y- X6 ^' C<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
& j# g5 e4 K! \! ^' G4 |5 F, X<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
, V3 o# P2 k$ }6 E" \<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
# Q* d1 D. y4 S; n6 O) h& C<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
  H7 N' J& @& Y- ]<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
: J) \7 T# U" j' u: A6 Z<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
) J2 U% w- n( {7 S  H' D- g<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
, m! v) h) U' u* {<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
- d5 e  j8 s. i: K% F6 V<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心

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bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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- i) h# ], t' G6 |) [4 t! F! R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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- ]0 X5 _& a# q6 t+ d6 u<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>