【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
% ~2 E5 V! ~- G, v) S% ^! KThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
- {, E# q& b' C# [I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
: [% C4 g) P; e/ H7 Z' J/ MIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
( |/ C; r  j: L% w7 m$ \) a; p' oI would probably know how you feel
# `  P* c( f; a' G) u6 z  Y& wLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 r) i+ d+ j5 U& Y8 vBut I never did
4 @" e2 b5 v. G5 r5 IOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
, n3 G: L' W3 f1 t% n# R' tIf today isn’t too late,
% r4 N- v) _/ ^' G/ b' K& JI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 B" k. f8 s8 W; @I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
- u5 e" _) o9 D' a8 |Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
# H1 L" D. B" m4 ^9 BOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
4 \3 ~( p4 [0 H8 g9 |+ jI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- T9 M% `6 |% F4 k7 E) S, r5 `! h& _I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ D5 B& Q0 Y% q1 h1 {5 jCan I entrust it to you?
0 \. W# C+ g9 U# Z5 _" w8 c2 xEntrust my love within your heart
* V( B9 u2 }$ T4 iCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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5 F  M3 r/ Q% l( r8 U# p[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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" \/ [* q6 l9 v; M<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
$ O" n9 B0 m) C+ Y; r, ]<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
; i1 b7 o1 q+ E! D! x5 }! l<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
. v5 c# l! R6 K8 l+ L" d) A<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
( ~, l) \9 D/ N( Y4 B' `<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
: \+ T8 |7 v. P4 z<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
1 Q# O7 g5 G) U% ]3 ?<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
  K8 y' b% t3 p! t; [9 ~0 i3 X1 ?5 o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
4 I  I( ^5 z/ J3 X% {<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
& V6 f7 C  E2 |% E; i1 f<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
% n! D# D% v" F4 o/ B<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
8 Y8 p: C% H# J! u, f) }& |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
9 L- T0 s8 y5 y  [. K$ G<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
- }" M- u2 d8 L1 `2 y7 G<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
5 B, D5 @' r. I6 n- F5 ]6 z( y<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
$ I) k& e! j; S" a  b6 I8 y; Y( x7 c<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
* K2 H. w- A* a4 g/ i<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
" Z* W4 \$ [" @% N<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
+ c8 S# w' a8 y, J4 W5 x/ S0 n<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
- J0 b5 U+ s' |0 G: Q<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
( @- H3 J! z& z5 m5 O8 G+ A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
* S" I2 ], _& H4 Y: V<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, [/ G1 U8 Q* t% O<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
( u6 Y2 S, U! `5 n0 n% F- i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
2 P8 u' ^6 Q; x/ ^<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
5 ]: S4 `$ J1 G. }' v$ K<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
9 ^' Z4 p5 j" j<P>但我不会 </P>
; S" q4 P# j4 g4 V: ?3 d7 x3 E<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
. ^. y/ L; j4 c% I5 N3 j# T<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
1 s* o  f0 o1 U2 N' i<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
1 Z' i6 G# n4 A* ^<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
! }% t5 \2 q: O% @* m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
  i  X/ B, ]9 M3 H<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
) ?" H3 t' R1 i2 J# U, ?<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
8 O4 U8 R" W2 ~) [0 X<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; J+ U5 n) V& A" Y  N<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
' n1 T( [3 A7 I; h* \2 k<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ r7 P. j1 t6 T7 y$ R<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
% T/ L/ J' v2 w; }<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
" c. w( W3 f* Y4 Z/ P/ c  v0 j
$ P1 @9 s' [; n" f4 U( u/ O  n: \ 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
/ H8 G% q3 i* b6 |9 p
, {8 N2 H3 x* N  r& c这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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8 P( g" {% k1 l2 ~$ `4 n0 Y# j<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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$ G. B* W* a5 f3 O9 K" I- d<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>