【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。

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3 w# q# e+ X5 O: L0 _1 h我另将歌词附在此。
7 S+ J3 M7 W" a/ `  K" |+ DThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
2 w  w! Q5 m8 j( t# {- V( IWe meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
$ I( ?1 g; {. A$ wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 w0 f; k$ n' W& |! t8 WI would probably know how you feel
0 B% ?2 H" h+ g7 d0 U" [# mLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. C, c  E* h$ U4 u7 y. r* a1 [( _1 m' qI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
% D' y+ w# E4 L( \; cI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
7 d: F! @" {6 [* N- ?- JI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
" G: h" r9 V* s. vLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
4 n  ~' t" o. s  F; t6 T# p+ mBut I never did
9 X9 _( V$ a, t8 m! S, m8 UOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
* F* e2 C# t, ZIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
: Q' H. p5 ]. fEntrust my love within your heart
5 n. E' P  ~* g' h. |5 QCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
" k  t% c/ N; y/ S: {<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
, }" t% S" O; W7 n  @<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
1 f' k  {- d+ [6 K<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
8 j5 q/ Y! m6 H' N<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
- c$ `  }$ V4 g$ B$ ?& }<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
$ o3 w6 H2 J1 X( T. @<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
/ r9 _4 g- P/ w<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
1 d5 T3 D  ~1 z5 t6 |<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
* I% |( V- }5 Z3 D8 z<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
/ o' u6 L; }" f0 q/ h+ u<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
% q3 M& F: ~# b. C<P>我想说我爱你</P>
* ~: M8 }0 W- N' T+ q<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
7 j/ V1 z, ?! O9 L1 A5 U2 Z<P>但我不会</P>
4 a3 C# W+ B/ P3 x; x: f$ {<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 d& K4 w) u, q; q* \<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
, K1 H3 h% w. i$ G$ z<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
" {- P( F- ?' ~8 E- J1 }<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
9 A4 G+ L- n# W' \& K6 K/ C<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
8 D. a7 o( p8 n: L( n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
7 n/ f# ]; o. `1 U<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
: m' J: ~+ W& K& _/ L<P>Love… just the word love </P>
0 Q" p' m' k1 n* d, `<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
5 `* ?  F4 F' d. g<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
/ P& o* _8 p$ }* D<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
3 c1 U) [6 L" x9 e" [, m<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
7 e0 T  b& h, f<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
$ Z6 s; |2 \% W1 Z9 U) c* Y<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
5 J4 Q  q4 r3 G2 R<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
1 |# r% F: a( u( z) Z. F. q<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
! k" j: ]! [! Q4 ~1 y& z2 b7 ~" H, u! p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
+ }  Z) ^# h4 H: @1 [/ x. O% ^6 Y1 z<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
0 W/ H6 y0 g% }! Y' f8 L<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
$ s; \4 F7 W& Z' F7 [  B; Y$ r0 l<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
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* ^. T- ?0 N3 v9 m8 _3 {1 x这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

' W. @1 B$ t& O2 q/ R这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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- s6 x0 Y7 u. r& R9 u<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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4 A: L7 X3 N. g7 y<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>