【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。
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我另将歌词附在此。
$ W0 @  h4 ?0 ^% [7 VThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
4 ^' j9 |9 p5 ]( C+ h- cI already loved you with all my heart
# Q) M' ^$ y$ [We meet and talk everyday,
! ~3 i4 w& P# f" g3 j. i& v4 nBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
  E* @5 k+ C) l; r( m* z4 dIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
9 ^7 q5 m. s9 B6 ]1 E9 d  n+ }I would probably know how you feel
8 Q6 v; P" R* _. ^. W" i( OLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
2 f0 N: c. p9 W) A: qIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
- i  A+ C6 h6 c% J$ {- `I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
; z& q9 `$ R+ p( C; P/ MCan I entrust it to you?
+ c) o: T+ R1 m. vEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
9 J7 R6 L( e! q& u2 s0 g" mWhy is it so difficult to express?
, M: k, D: S: S* `I want to confess that I love you,
% u/ h; S3 ^& o+ W' h: ^) RBut I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
; A0 d# x8 p6 F' V, DI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 `- q% s  p6 \" }Can I entrust it to you?
6 f$ ]3 N% E( ^Entrust my love within your heart

+ O' x- Y* X' e[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

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5 a2 n- t! O& b! t) A$ c, [<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
$ b. D! C0 @* G! E$ S$ m% K4 ^<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
3 V6 o& x: ^4 Y. m- ~4 V<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
2 o0 n: ~) d% \; e$ i2 M<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
6 x( f0 _; U' t<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
, x# `" W4 p" y6 D<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
9 n8 f. c& J: g<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
( D5 J  S1 W" G4 f, M3 c) `3 D2 d<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
- g1 Y% f% U9 |; U2 H: o0 k<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
- ?" X: F; [* u; I, U<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
2 }! R0 y% }  }+ P  d* [5 w. N<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
$ m2 r2 b3 Z) {" l<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
& f- V0 I+ R5 \. I* n<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
, O( s& [5 e6 |% y<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
- U" y5 K, b& c& C& V7 N# K<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
  \) j, [( r- e7 ^<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
4 [9 o' L. j" a4 K<P>但我不会 </P>
6 M- _8 {3 ~7 J" ?1 r# _. P5 t<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
* m/ l: X9 e+ z4 {) k. n9 I<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
4 l0 S  s% W" R/ F; X<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
; H' n+ e6 o8 S4 X5 e% W3 m$ n6 t<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
0 O* D4 z: D7 t, K+ s: y<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
, Q0 {- z5 r9 c; n<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
8 Q$ y1 t6 ?, B8 ]$ |5 S  y<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
* `& c4 y0 Z. w, p<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
% g; |* D, Z$ j# o$ C<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
6 S+ g: q3 L; _  h5 B( S! F9 {<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,

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这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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+ E- Q. z; F8 D' U; \0 k& H这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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& h$ |! k) Z# I+ w1 r2 ~. a& L- I<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>