【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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* t* {0 W7 @" s我另将歌词附在此。
+ g% J* I% J: _  U( s8 aThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 a. C/ r* Y- p, e1 g0 O* k0 rThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
From the first moment we met,
5 {3 N0 g& S% |. o9 u* v" X1 DI already loved you with all my heart
2 i( b  R' w& G  `# {We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
. g& {" `+ T. E& GI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
- t' t4 l: Q- e, K! O6 zOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) H3 p# C6 ^9 n6 o( LIf today isn’t too late,
/ t' J5 }0 T# J+ xI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?
& {) u0 Z9 e# g' _( ~6 lI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
2 U# f6 n4 w- Z" z) @8 iOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
* `. k7 `2 c. W9 P4 B7 ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
! N5 Z, W, \. G: sCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
- |/ J  R$ ?% `' E" n, Z* }$ h% w- KCan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

- _3 L, T: `/ `. d1 r<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
5 @; p' ]  Z! W& i" h) w<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
: `- ]# D) J2 d7 j0 O<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
, y7 t! }9 q0 U  {7 w1 g<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
7 }; H3 T2 }3 S; r8 _0 I<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
8 \: [( Q+ x! M2 O1 ]7 D  |<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
2 o$ g8 }! u7 C+ X# C4 v! @7 y: U<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
) V! z. D1 u" Y. ?<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
% P' W' k8 M7 N# {$ B+ p9 V<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
3 b& z4 K1 ^* z3 O& ?* Q' U<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
1 `1 X. d8 B. P8 M<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
! l- a- A" ^. T( h( k, S<P>但我不会</P>
<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
8 _/ B# }: m* b; p/ m<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
& k# P! @1 @/ z/ g+ `* {# |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
8 x4 j4 P7 C, B! A5 r3 E<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
5 h8 Z! ~6 ]* S# A3 k0 _4 p<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
- s$ P) a" J3 h<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
6 J5 {' |% j  |<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
% K1 x5 ], S7 I1 i<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
2 h1 S4 ?. f4 Z# I+ @2 e<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
" T/ y# N$ M) j! T<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
$ R* m, o) ?* \<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
) s) k6 }5 E" m" \! ]<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
9 d. i6 S+ G7 r& C<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
# K% [  M/ R; r1 B$ _. ^  p! [<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
; O* C, Z5 l2 x0 T1 Q  m/ m/ ^$ D) K<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
  n- y: x- z8 i) Y; x<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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6 `2 I* k, d; U 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
& x8 y* v0 u9 g1 L% v7 C: V% d
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
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9 X& W" {+ r# A. f' Y2 N3 Q+ E这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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2 [* k$ h: l6 B<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>小雅 发表于 2008-12-3 16:57</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=545791&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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0 B7 a  s5 U2 c; e6 m<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>