【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
6 d$ ~% X6 f$ i! x, Y; gMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
! q9 H% h. e4 n, g' aThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
3 T3 [8 I) z3 N& nWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
/ m2 s* y5 F. aYou needn’t fear anything
- t% F1 E2 e7 aMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; P  Z& D% ?! f: u9 J* oI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
5 k2 a9 b. T5 B8 e( S/ L, gNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
3 i; s. z4 W8 a( ?  H9 T! \I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
2 n4 m+ @+ K) M# X0 ^6 W3 SYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
& h- T4 J& D6 GIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
$ f" L! q5 e, D' W. M5 T* h. k7 [0 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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" f& p  O) B" u' ^" x# n( Y$ \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
0 W' l; }  n2 \<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
0 V$ ^) ~( E% L<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
* P: g- O( B% O4 k, C7 y1 `1 C<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
% D5 {5 y5 L/ [/ ~1 s3 u' |<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
% N: Y! ]. k1 }- c3 D% v<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
; s2 ]6 x8 l- Y! U, }4 }0 v/ v' X2 d<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
" l) _3 p& a( M3 `<P>你无需担心</P>
0 [; e  c* F  U& V<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
5 w2 r7 V+ f+ T' Y! J, e<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
) w% f4 j# P0 A# k4 q. u" j6 ]# I<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. e/ C  s( O" ?$ t<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 {, u/ N9 X& K/ `3 q# R5 S( y<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
3 @' a( D! v$ ^* S9 n<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
+ i) Y+ ~( t" g5 p& ?& I<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
+ F$ N7 \9 Y: r% k# m<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
7 z: b9 z5 i# P$ i5 f; h<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
4 E8 ~( {2 A4 r2 j# g1 X<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
! [  N4 X! }* I<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
* G6 D% p; a, A9 S. u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
5 M) w% @1 ~4 x; d$ ?) f' f: Y( u  W<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
& G/ z5 V* H: f0 z. @* U% \5 V<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
* a2 [5 a, I8 p$ o' ]<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
$ g3 g. M% L# Z6 E. h0 a- u/ R+ K<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
  U: U' Z2 K/ f) D( i8 |2 l<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
4 d  d' u9 h  t0 F& M6 E! _7 d; I<P>I regret not dying</P>
: P* v* P3 n* ?8 d, M9 ?7 B8 ^) Q5 V<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
. h4 k# K7 b3 H3 s0 Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
% Z2 w7 l, E" H<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
! \0 m& d  x7 v<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
, M/ l, o: r/ I1 ^! R2 n* M<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
7 H8 b' J  J! |' g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% z# k  t# N* S, `! `2 |0 b我请你剖开它
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" V/ o  a& v7 e3 ^ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>