【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
# o% S) Z1 r% EThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- k; Z) U9 p; ?  o! PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
* X# S" k% ]1 Z3 e( b2 [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 P' A# a* e9 }/ `) W/ _The sky is happy down to its soul
, O! K+ C2 s. P6 v' T( y1 GWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
7 V3 U/ c' U. x! ?9 VMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
( V3 Z- I9 N! E5 fNothing can compare to my love
9 Q& |9 p+ t& [! mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
! v, b7 X6 e7 u+ v7 ~2 tI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
. W# Z0 m. p7 X4 f9 j8 ZYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
$ Y; o4 h4 u9 w. b4 C. J" g# R! LI regret not dying
7 s, L% S) z7 e8 K( g7 QI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
/ T8 q% Y1 C8 Y" E- \2 o2 D3 f/ xWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
4 F& e+ R% l) q: I- XRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
* m# L' S4 g( x. P5 Q1 x9 \" E<P>月光闪亮 </P>
5 Y" F2 ^4 F/ O& s1 W6 x* W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
: T$ k7 N: g' S<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
+ B4 o3 I1 t' M6 ]/ W8 J' i<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
, m$ B7 F" ^& d- M' }. X  a<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
% F8 }7 t* C1 H6 Q; u  G<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
, p3 ~" z; F0 B. u5 G<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 \4 G; q' U0 V' k<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' k$ g. d% z$ q# p% j! Z( d8 J$ Q<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
0 \  Q% {' k0 Z% x+ {% _* A" G) K  t<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 R, s' n1 d( O<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
  p1 `  j4 ~' m) B, \/ @<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- x& M) S5 x  _) r- \<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
. U% d+ |; ]9 L5 F8 a, L<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
4 n1 b" b7 E& y+ s) K+ ^- f<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" f2 N0 K) @: D0 p<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
  E& G" {) R9 V<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
* O' F$ q$ D9 E% C: P0 p9 \<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
8 ]+ E' |# w" Z5 O8 w; {' _! S<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
. {: B0 L6 e5 D0 _+ ~<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
( u( F9 Y& f8 z/ U<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
3 L1 N- b6 E- M' o. h$ E  G<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
. U' ~$ l- G& `; ?<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
1 J0 z3 W) r% I4 D<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
& D/ @7 T# r' A0 e6 G<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
5 x9 c. a/ k3 n/ r# r3 i- d<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
( F0 s% [7 u9 D9 x+ S<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
" U% |; ^1 Y5 N' l<P>I regret not dying</P>
! N" ^) T: }9 n<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
% A, o" S# S! ]& I  ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& M+ |' t9 F/ Q2 \7 E! B<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
5 I: y' Z! }0 _* M<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
$ l( \, t* y! D1 ~, A. R, r5 W<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
+ j/ u- ]( w- a+ x9 l5 o) u' |<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
8 [9 t5 L$ x) G( S. [) b2 D$ ~! f<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

% h2 \/ d$ p# l/ k我请你剖开它
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9 d; M' t: P6 S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>