【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
8 ~9 m8 K4 w, C2 Z4 X* }, IThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
+ |! g) d. w" v, s/ v6 ^With the moon kissing it every night
1 V( d* h& z4 W+ ]3 q5 v8 oSeeing the sky content with its love
7 b! B. v7 ?' mIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
0 U& y* p* u9 p; p( N* UYou needn’t fear anything
# m  ^. L5 _  `1 vMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
; O1 W, B  i2 c2 L; i* cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
" B5 q0 k, B2 E: I) b* O! c' {I want so much to see inside your heart
3 X/ T! n- _: gI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
) M0 b# q# f1 _; Q. X' E6 r; tI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
: K- H7 f+ F7 z2 o: mRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

% }& c7 t4 A2 p; V5 [  e3 V1 G7 g<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
. _, Q, n, I9 ~# B<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
# s+ h; o. e" {$ h& t<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) w3 H; a& q+ e! R9 {<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
5 }  T7 e% C3 f7 q$ e+ N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
$ V  F4 q% Q3 m! V# o<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
' s# g" j& n7 T* _8 A! x) u<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
# a' I* t3 }" p3 ?<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
8 ~* m" E% `( G+ d$ W<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
6 F& |. Z# W  T- f2 J" }* m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
1 n+ R# s: @' o/ [6 }<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
( A' C: o! ~3 b& @' y# u<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
- D: g! v1 ?! @; w<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
/ c# @- v, Y- G8 d* F$ i1 |<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
2 \9 @- v9 a1 s; D<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 [7 ^  h. m% W4 E! y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
6 Q8 A5 g; @  K<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
9 V% Z5 e& G# }% M/ o  R( I/ s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
0 s2 C9 U1 X8 J. p<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
* O4 i' F8 J" H& ]& Y<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
% T4 g. V8 k/ ]# z/ s4 E<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
5 r" o+ i4 ~) `# G<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
3 I/ Y; q6 P$ o6 c<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: O6 i1 A0 ]; e7 _3 P- C<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
' @. h) {1 _% v<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
- g. R+ G- ?8 F$ g<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
: N, _+ o6 _; b6 q- _6 y; z0 n<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
5 ?2 K7 R2 U+ I2 k) w, m<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
9 i4 @' _5 F# {( Z* N6 s' m3 c<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

5 q. Z7 B% F0 n+ H: N我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 P! R3 X2 E& d. e1 ~<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>