【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
0 d8 X$ u* k+ a" E2 L: |4 X0 GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
+ k6 r$ M- @! M- B$ GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
3 C: f1 O$ E! AThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
1 {0 M% T3 f4 \My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 H4 X( t( ^! U9 A; aEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
6 t2 T2 D$ p, K, ^0 p3 ?6 z& ?I love you I love you with all my heart
5 x& q" A6 `% x( Q+ v) LNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
7 x( S( v; b' E/ j" @The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
9 Q7 J& o3 s4 u+ II only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
' b3 d7 L8 m( {2 `0 U% h$ p0 fYour speech can’t even keep up with it
2 j/ t3 w6 \+ ]9 H: RIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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1 h" l" r8 Y" p$ _5 N/ L<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
9 D9 X" N. M0 G8 @<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) a. w! ~% _8 Z# t<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
6 z8 e( }* p3 m0 f. z<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
. l) k, D$ L. L: Z* K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
1 m6 e4 K4 A8 f* r7 p* v/ `<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
5 y% n* O0 L5 S<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ l! J4 \" V" M9 j( T" B6 E<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
- X5 _- r3 {/ `- f0 ]<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' o: c: `" S2 N- ^<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 ?/ I: U0 b0 g3 I7 n2 f<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, A1 Q* I0 d$ }<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
( [! b- b% y: H9 G" A% y8 @* W<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 E0 y1 D$ _2 H/ Y" H9 [7 p5 [5 M<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
% I0 @# X) G" M. s# J& u<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 f$ ]. y2 C, z<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
0 K; I4 n6 f% C: e# a4 U<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
: G+ G0 V5 Z6 B. ]# `+ b: X- b<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
8 Y+ ]" i& T. K<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
) K; r6 K& n) n, P0 D<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
9 ^) x: B7 f7 s$ y; t# D! M5 Y+ b<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
3 E; z3 d! P7 X( \<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
& n% e, R0 t5 |: c7 w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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" E% H" H! b1 ~( F! [/ r. r我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>