【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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4 ?6 w9 f7 }( A% h歌词我附在后面。
- h. q- G5 S! b+ b* GThe moonlight is shining brightly,
; A4 \. Z, m5 r7 pMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
/ n: L- H+ k8 O. S1 PThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
6 |  q4 Q  O* a$ G( N' SWith the moon kissing it every night
0 v- B& ?0 O1 Z5 j  `- }- USeeing the sky content with its love
6 c! U6 z" ~+ u% x9 |* B9 K( A0 SIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
' k* t! b; ~4 R! O% DMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
3 N$ b' X* c* u% pEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ ^& N( ?$ j% F3 D0 N( l4 pNothing can compare to my love
/ l; o; z' Z: {Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
% `% }- n& J+ iThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
  _: l8 Y& o) U+ M. k% f4 ^I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
* ~; ~. E, O. ]0 t$ H% _7 lI’m still filled with fear
5 R' W3 m6 m% y% PYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; e1 A" V  P/ |$ q. B: o, JI regret not dying
3 B* e( C% I4 S3 o6 x* bI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! a( A% u/ R3 `+ r7 ?# pWith such a tongue as yours,
5 p4 B) ^/ i7 f* h" E& K7 kYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
, v5 D2 A8 m2 ]5 i6 e, m1 NRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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9 b2 h0 Q: w3 Z' M+ |3 Y- j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
  h- l* b" H% Y# Y. n; R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
7 V6 i: s  b( D" {& R6 `<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
1 [- N; c4 x2 i  T9 R' ]; u  _<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
- H' `6 N3 V, b+ A<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
. V2 R- r7 \5 V3 J<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
/ g$ z) z' I3 g0 j7 b  S<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
! m. T5 C. F$ D; K/ m8 u, P) b<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
3 s8 O2 o3 b/ M' K<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" F, x+ y: x  A: M- |; w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 n$ n8 l. m3 @5 c* v8 {<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% M/ {' t3 L9 f<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) i) R1 F9 v, Y) V1 G<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
0 s; F8 T# U! `# y8 ^' v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
9 K9 F( L, z6 W4 O* Q8 e( B<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
( k( S4 X& n& H8 E( V( g<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 _+ y. K/ l1 |/ j& ?8 s  Y  t<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 m) W( m# u  o5 _<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
7 f/ ?, Q1 b6 [- {3 e<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
; D3 B8 `6 q- S1 Y# }<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
* b8 P4 k3 F+ I<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
! p! s- X0 M. r5 V<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, x& A& Z4 d! J& l; h<P>I regret not dying</P>
8 |2 d- H( r- r% C# m. B: G; ?6 U<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ R% c/ x# B, k, g) _<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
# M! y; n# _) K5 ^* E<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
' t9 {8 C. I( b" C1 A( z<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
5 J8 D4 Z5 k% x/ y6 I! p  ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& y& F6 ^5 q- S8 V8 E& G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
6 x! J2 b; a( K; P) u" G<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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; h9 X  ~2 ~* S4 K: i; }2 ^% A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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( @) D8 w1 e, A( a4 U- f1 W<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>