【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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, U6 i+ E' L! M% o! a歌词我附在后面。
7 v0 z9 z5 H, V9 BThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
# u* c. B$ x: k7 I# k9 FThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
  {6 I; H4 R/ ?; e2 g& H5 Y5 }It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
# x# V4 u; }; i* GI love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
% d8 G2 g4 {4 N) E' t. Y' mCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
( h7 {9 |; w( d; \0 u1 Y7 S7 [I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
9 q' p& z" W1 R& d. S* r) F* AYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
( g8 `6 X. ^: pI regret not dying
6 |6 [5 n* W. M% I. o8 v2 pI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
9 U. R9 F4 ^/ {With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
' v4 a) I3 |$ d; d<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
6 D' A- j  t- z, V4 |2 C<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  `0 b& h* r0 o' Z7 \* R* a<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
7 @" I  s1 T4 K) h, q1 \<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
& k3 u0 Z' G8 J<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
% ~2 C* [9 t+ |9 Y: H<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
. Z9 G- r- V; w9 m' t  m<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 _! G8 K6 S, L0 v  Y- b<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
0 p7 G# u+ V3 q  `/ L/ z<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
2 \8 M+ R  {  |4 D2 S<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
& P; P; d) t3 {4 _<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' U/ P+ P# T! _* v) L<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ M) {, k* C0 L; t& j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
+ i& m: `% ~: ]9 t- B* [<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# {2 d1 t  V9 ]2 P<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
+ W1 u$ f. J3 s( H9 A( b% B' C<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
5 `3 a! }. S* T* d/ ?0 H6 I2 z<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
7 E% Y: H: _2 v: K<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ M4 V. X* }7 V<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" F" E) ~' ]# L<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
2 Z) y# _: J) D1 f' Q. s# Q% D<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
0 O! G& o3 ]' l<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: x; K$ b7 K9 v% X- f+ ?! I<P>I only have one tongue </P>
$ L# ^0 ~, ?, }<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 r( Q* Q3 c1 F<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
" `8 k6 H: c* v' \8 M( p3 Y% Y<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" K8 p6 D7 g' K1 ~3 R<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% ~3 {# g/ `8 j, \<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
2 F+ r. ?$ _& W6 w4 F6 x<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
! r& q+ S+ o  V. d* ]2 E<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

  \, T8 D, p: a! j0 Z我请你剖开它
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似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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6 ~- S% c/ y* ~  c<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>