【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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8 d: q3 y+ _! b3 h0 `歌词我附在后面。
: w5 ?$ j2 a& u# J0 QThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
; J2 j- J3 t3 x8 [7 [. L* FWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 X- r4 k1 `, \; \5 M' U, E! EThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
) Y6 D; ^2 m: c9 ^/ E; R8 t( r+ ]It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
- K. v" h+ H; @! \6 x% [- ?My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
- H$ z! Y* x$ ]- A2 z0 ]Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
* x* f& C" {$ L3 B; ACan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
& W2 t8 w! w+ @. B/ O# q: dI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 {$ f$ n( t! y6 h1 _& @I regret not dying
4 |) n  [' p9 X/ v3 u2 w. l# ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
) h0 E, z1 w6 y1 DWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
; ^9 l, ?4 J+ v2 V& w3 C% ^If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
" }* L3 t/ p$ qRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 v, y# J7 J8 c3 H; J8 O<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
( V; A3 v: P# Y' i<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
8 A- s' n+ @  m0 Y9 U<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
% v2 J& f- [; Z$ n' }' S: @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
) ^3 ^" t4 E& R/ h7 Y" A5 s6 p<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  P, O) L3 n9 Q; [" X# l1 U<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
7 @  c0 ^4 O5 A" _3 u7 u<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
8 O6 |, K( h8 f! j( T) b8 G<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
+ N: n6 i" ~9 o) i1 e<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
; e# j5 e2 J, X5 u<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
9 f# Y8 B+ m% \6 `- b* a" j5 W& l) p<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
  ?2 v; p. v: S8 A+ x& w8 h<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
: D2 V& T, B. \1 t8 i: D8 e<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
/ I# t" q6 @. P0 t7 Y7 i) ^<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
' {3 t9 W6 }8 x# ]7 G! ?<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
/ d- w% U+ d. s# s2 I- j: R<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
5 z* C, w6 t* W# Q<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 }4 y/ R- I" A+ Z; o9 O5 T! R: Z0 y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
! O* l, q( W2 l4 K  _<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
' n* B9 R) W: b# h<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
4 z. s6 f3 ~3 q1 O<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
& z/ t4 W. ~+ A6 S3 R. X5 `. g<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
) O( n; b* N7 x& J* k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 C! v: X9 N1 H: G, {( F2 M<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
: B: M7 V0 F6 b1 ^/ S- L6 B<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
+ o. E* R  d3 ~8 d9 x" Q<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
% k  t3 N3 W" x8 N3 g<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
  h& P0 N4 q2 b0 l( s0 f" ?<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& U8 W9 C$ J7 K* J* Z/ D9 W9 ~<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
( [$ _* _9 |0 n4 J6 v<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  D+ c& ~2 H6 O, ~* r/ R2 v& F<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: H. T7 A! t' V& p  C2 [3 s<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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6 r6 m' M6 y5 D, ?( x我请你剖开它

9 r% N2 {% ]. p% D5 e3 A 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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8 w0 p$ s3 V* J: |. G9 m& j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>