【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
$ W; W/ f2 G+ `! VThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
5 d9 f9 T6 c# l  r$ ?% wThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 e6 S; j) I8 |! D7 tThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 H. }+ r' [+ F7 L# HWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
, D4 q& g" N) `0 k; GIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
; R+ t4 C0 {* @% iYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
( d( l- z5 S6 |  P. D# ^9 W9 UEvery other word you utter is love
7 a& ]# D9 F$ ^- F5 u) V7 n, R- YI really want to know just how much you love me
% x! R7 {9 t- z0 i1 |1 eI love you I love you with all my heart
& |' K) z' A- C4 s3 nNothing can compare to my love
5 Z8 c. W/ w7 YCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
' y* R6 W* s0 ?( k" Q8 \" ~6 lThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
: f, [9 S8 h8 t  rI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
3 x8 w$ F# Y/ E- tI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
3 w/ C2 l- C5 C1 rI regret not dying
2 [3 u( ^& `7 {# }, ]I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 i4 n; ]( l( n) ?8 X. OWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  E$ I6 {+ p4 `# |/ JRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

5 k( r! q: {& e, _$ e<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ L; T0 s. x6 S- ]<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
  l$ E, |+ ~, A  @2 Z' [<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
4 G( G# t* t7 z" y6 z4 E<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
# d1 ]7 R( f) a( G7 b/ b<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
  `; ]/ _- P9 A: w<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
2 ?$ [  j( d" j9 C3 {$ {  k<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
8 U0 t' ]4 {+ p0 b8 B<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
$ z5 F* p5 B2 J: D2 l# S! }1 f) j<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
1 t7 O3 o" ^; s0 F% F) d& [% `<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
8 _! k9 a; L. w2 H<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
2 d8 N1 y0 P) ]2 O<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
) o. ~, `+ J, _. L8 m: G<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
0 f& C# t& x' }<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
7 O9 _: u) r* k. a6 Q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
: w" v; ?- H  b8 {+ X: J) w<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
% [, Z5 X5 [% {<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
9 ~+ W+ A$ C8 g8 Z9 Q<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
/ O, \/ Y* i/ a<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
5 {3 K8 s9 {/ ~( g, x% K" C<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
" i/ R6 o. _, a<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
) z& u4 s9 O+ b" S, @<P>I regret not dying</P>
  l/ [2 P9 V; U9 I& \<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
1 X: x3 a4 [- o8 K' }" {% N, P! A! S<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
/ L% C; A! m+ X/ U$ n& n& M<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
. v' e, T/ o3 D0 z1 o8 E1 d<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

* ^6 ]) y  X; r! m我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>