【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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" e/ o: l3 Z; `歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
* Z0 ?, E1 P7 U% c2 _" yWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
9 j8 G# s( g3 j& T) t' Q# \It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
" [" ]6 C( d; B; W0 c# B# b# PYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
3 g( y8 f- c, _& cNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
, f0 ^+ x! B& h1 U/ [The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
1 r' q, J: e4 RI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
4 U, a8 L( Y# a" O- Y  z6 w7 u  zWith such a tongue as yours,
+ U4 v/ |# P/ y% v1 M! lYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

' G8 M$ Q; s/ W, h+ M! q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
# U' o3 n# J4 I  q2 A1 F" U<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ H0 ~: Z' Q+ n6 M) R( j- S<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
% g# p3 u' m- ]# X2 `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
3 j( ?' ^$ w' E2 G<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
; y! Z% q( q2 K<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
" D  f- M, @2 Z' P" ^7 [; Q<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) x/ b2 \3 g1 s+ q<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
9 d5 K! U* x" T* f4 b* K1 M<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
: s& }3 W2 ^9 v. H) u5 M<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
' k5 R) ?+ s. H$ a6 ^* a2 {, n<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" m( R! t7 Y8 j3 }/ \1 @# v<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
9 ^/ ~/ {4 o+ ~  N% \0 X<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
1 h3 e( r; e) }& x" j<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
2 e/ y0 U  Y3 y- y' h! U* i8 n9 y<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# t5 w) A& J. ~# `<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
8 e9 u8 x5 O; e; N- S$ N<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
" z5 @/ s. j2 u7 J2 u. {# s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
: ?. A: J2 z6 ]) S4 }# ^1 H" v* @' X" J<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
9 h: e2 N0 i% T& Z<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& [& ]* O2 `, }6 r) j<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

8 @0 O# L4 u; t  m9 @ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. g7 E) j6 i$ f( W1 o& s<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>