【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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% w8 x$ y# R$ N, i8 K歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
; t! m1 |! ^4 J9 Q; h/ [% ?! GMaking the sky glitter like gold,
, N# H2 C) Q+ V1 ~. ?- \% i. kWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
$ t- R# h3 k( q* [The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
" q# d4 t: w& H/ n; F$ sThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
# l2 l3 F& H6 E5 S7 f* _You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
' @, [0 w, a( w" }5 N3 z# `Every other word you utter is love
: g( f6 R, }% v4 f# {I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
/ t% X& b4 \" TNothing can compare to my love
+ M( g) y; t& T* @: t0 m" gCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
: H+ Z8 B7 q! |" i6 jI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% M8 D3 r8 P" w9 DYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  Q$ }" J* K7 G0 JIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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# ^- |* E: H! o0 Q<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
+ ^! n- l1 l  Z% I1 ^5 R<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
, }5 Y# Y6 n3 M  [$ `<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
7 q- b* w1 r( I3 i; J; V1 a& }. E2 z<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
  j9 p4 E5 \3 q/ d( m* u<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
  L1 r$ t7 Y& w/ {- @<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
. V6 ^" m, j3 Q2 L! {<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 c# {8 q+ W. g: k. S; p- j<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* R2 ^, x% l% J$ V( _<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
- w. F. V" U4 Z' y" ?! n<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
5 D% K. e' z- N) L" f) O( n<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
+ h/ |3 Y0 ?# i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 c- v' q/ x1 z# _6 I<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
5 @/ k5 E" g8 ], @8 f6 f6 p5 j<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
1 Q3 o% y! s5 e# Y<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
% C( i% m: X- y( Z& p<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
: b; q4 t9 s1 i6 p<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
" ?. ?- f7 G- `  ]/ ]<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
# J6 d' _6 g3 |  t7 m$ V0 Z0 B" j3 o<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
& q/ s- M3 {/ w" Y: C5 v( |<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
: P9 D4 ~( D- ^" V9 m<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
$ M1 E& |6 s% O* a7 F% V<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
1 G3 A4 f, V2 ~: x! x% B<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
+ R( s: G3 ^% h7 d$ u  ~# @<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
7 S6 E' \$ w  R% g' P. ]<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
# V* f) I* O/ Y/ x( E$ {<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
2 S1 _1 f& U9 O' X. V) I<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
! Q& P  j, ^7 p<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
& U4 H8 h3 X9 F9 F/ Q' V: j& F<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
3 R3 k3 f8 F. }9 c* @; ~( Y<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
7 t3 p' ]/ O# s7 Y3 _% @" T<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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: h( h* }3 _1 g8 s我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>