【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
( ?) p4 Z& A& h! i/ }The moonlight is shining brightly,
! R7 w7 v+ C2 w" P& ]7 U( i& a9 [Making the sky glitter like gold,
9 j1 V# Y* A0 z+ @1 ]$ iWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; o6 U2 \- l' |; T% x2 l2 rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 Z, O) |/ O: ?; ?; J' aThe sky is happy down to its soul
! I( E1 }9 ]7 q0 ]6 [: {% A' ZWith the moon kissing it every night
, v6 m2 U  c9 M- b; pSeeing the sky content with its love
6 ~4 I8 ~& T. t% U5 uIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
* ]' T. A* q5 H& n8 YMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 S3 m" l7 m' \" Q9 w$ S( JEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
! w* G. ~# V4 z2 t, ?Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
) Z" h; ?, D- j$ yI want so much to see inside your heart
3 y3 F, @) F+ R& b) ?9 k) @; PI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
6 q& s" A- u* L; cI’m still filled with fear
9 t6 h4 _7 l, d) e. L9 KYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
" |2 s- N3 s/ }( l9 NWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- h5 G: T, L; e$ {<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 @3 d7 G- ]  W<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
! `; r) b( _- k, J( \5 a<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
# _( z/ Z  q: v# Y2 R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
9 E- M4 G( i) g# K<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
/ w# ?- @( o& M, d* ~3 e2 A<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
' W5 l8 @. \; R: N' T6 r<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
1 c( s0 H+ b7 o6 |<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
6 {: G" {' S4 a<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" o( T& D1 t, d9 i9 [  z, G<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 }. Q) p: k3 B8 s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
" x! ^/ D4 k# Z2 j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
: G2 ]$ x6 s0 y8 ^! E: P<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
& j  }! a  _& J<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
: N; n* U! ?% }( m& U% h' C; S; m<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
% b3 |1 w0 G0 y/ `5 G<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
2 c' n$ W2 n% {( W( W0 a. U7 E# u<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
/ K; r: X: {; b4 m7 B+ @$ T<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
) c3 q5 I$ F' Z# n6 R<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

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) @4 b: D3 O5 ?& j, H( C4 r+ S 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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) {1 B: j4 [( K7 k: L# W# J<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>