【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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0 a9 h0 f4 u/ u) D! ^- \歌词我附在后面。
) t$ n$ M. k4 L% kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
9 ~, R$ r/ c4 J4 i; q5 PMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
$ E  U9 S& a. i5 i. x  F! l1 z' HThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
: _' i; S1 d8 f& q2 DSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
7 t" a& T  i) K9 T+ s7 dYou needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
1 |8 I- N/ Y5 [3 t. uI love you I love you with all my heart
3 n; j# s: o  x) d0 }/ KNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
6 t3 ~) t# G3 L* B# o9 Z( }4 jI want so much to see inside your heart
  J$ ]2 o7 j. @9 TI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
1 Z4 D% T; n# j/ M4 }$ J" [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; t5 i  G0 R; A  \0 X5 NI regret not dying
  P  \; }5 J: tI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
2 h& x$ Y9 I) WWith such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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$ |* T) D# G0 ~' t: \<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
$ d; \0 e" H0 @& M5 H<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
3 h4 i& p. G2 x' E# a<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
& U3 x% ^. Q. U6 ]! I& _<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
6 D) j" W# Y  A8 ^% F  X3 o3 e( g<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
; |! y! e7 ]" v# F<P>你无需担心</P>
' I( r8 T2 R4 ?. H& U<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
" x( y7 Y+ h9 d7 m; t2 ?<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
4 o* b3 e5 }$ M! K3 l& B<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
$ e0 h, {: o7 s<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
5 N3 F$ Y# e4 \/ l5 f$ n<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
. M  Z3 h5 z7 G<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
) R% U/ Y6 X$ H# U# I0 s1 n1 `<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
6 i; |/ `9 ]  m<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
+ G# c! t- T- p2 I" }/ }<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
: S7 f/ W# u. ^<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
3 F0 t$ o9 ?6 E7 o+ v2 e! t<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- }6 Z, M* C1 O* c1 E% D<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
  M  I- m  f1 m2 @  N! r9 A" k; a  k<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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. e0 A1 y: Y2 C& m% j<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>