【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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" v' e  |/ ]( j" [& j8 l; _歌词我附在后面。
/ S- a2 h, d4 o) |1 `& \The moonlight is shining brightly,
8 a7 m  o  I0 {: S/ ~. B* EMaking the sky glitter like gold,
8 x2 x) F* s) \3 N* B( {When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
3 v) T1 ?4 A( z' t" w. fThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
* |+ k% I5 R7 d9 NThe sky is happy down to its soul
4 k# D$ X. ?5 m# Z/ kWith the moon kissing it every night
' p0 \" a9 o; O7 S$ CSeeing the sky content with its love
; Z8 O  c* u$ {" d0 G/ l! TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
. P- d. y7 l% ZMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
1 c( h" p/ z7 b4 ]6 v( zEvery other word you utter is love
, V! h! K8 S1 P" ?# _I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
5 [# O: y' s3 {% I: P" `The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
3 a& o. ~3 d; C1 ^" X+ HI want so much to see inside your heart
/ X) B- y2 q6 y3 X9 Y# AI invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
' f( r$ F1 k/ ^8 {/ \I’m still filled with fear
; n2 j8 ]+ e. y" tYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
, x. J  k8 |: P+ ~& k# @% U, ^I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
! Q  x$ m6 \+ V7 _( LWith such a tongue as yours,
$ w: u3 K9 j$ ~; YYour speech can’t even keep up with it
) G! P9 @& Q( UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ Q! B- T9 R- _) o/ yRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
2 g, h8 P  D+ e<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
' a9 Z( j# h/ t- S7 A3 j9 n<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
1 }6 G" i9 o2 X% }6 Z% X0 w" x" \<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
5 P  a/ f* }1 z( J* D1 V5 D# X. ?<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
+ d' G. y# _+ H8 C4 A: @. x% w<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
7 z1 l, f0 X$ R<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
0 E' F' m3 {; F) z<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
* i. x; D0 a4 `& K+ j<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
% v  n; @4 F% y* X, i9 `<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
3 h3 Q! G! Q8 e5 P) _" D/ w, b& y$ z<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
, q7 W# |# i' D# U<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
7 `& T1 k" x2 `9 e" b<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
  M1 |# I! }2 P<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
# M3 |0 k, l! F8 P<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
# H3 k( Z. a9 a! K* r* k0 q<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
) G% }2 W+ x, ~<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
: C# U' ]% l3 K. T: T: b: o<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
' e' P. {' r! T1 z<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
& [/ U; [  `% I: T! R: J7 s<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
; c3 @) J. E  B1 v2 z/ L<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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. \/ q5 E% S) N& m; m& [ 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>