【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 [2 O: D: y! A; h# ^8 }When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
( f* @% H8 U/ j( X: v+ ^The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
: |0 K& K1 R) w* {The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
+ f& }/ x( J0 \6 p; zSeeing the sky content with its love
& D: e* H1 e: |( Y( DIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
3 ]1 X$ ~  D& bYou needn’t fear anything
  e% U5 D3 Z: ~' r2 N( {  [  f. ^My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
9 k+ j& ?8 w; DI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
# X  ^) V/ }/ z2 C! V5 b! p- \) o" eCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
+ x9 T8 K& j2 k; s$ b5 D) [I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
8 F7 M( r  }+ D* m* T# OI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
. i3 `8 x6 o, m% rYour speech can’t even keep up with it
( M% ?4 i. D+ N- T5 p" X, U* o1 Z+ C3 TIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
* m) _( _1 C4 M  g. `4 }Rambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

. v' t; [3 r( U* ^9 j<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
# f- h0 x  o; \5 l1 H1 a7 P: o9 v<P>月光闪亮 </P>
  }: O% E& U* t2 u4 D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
4 q+ r; ?$ K3 T- |<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
. Z. P5 J, L' i' o<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
) U1 d9 U1 A' g7 A/ d  d* x<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
  \& h) d+ S  j" N<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
* V* e. r$ {3 g/ M2 S0 v- a<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- {+ M4 D) s- T) p<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
2 y, u- J) w( S% L6 f1 ~<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
6 g; K2 o* m  Z5 o" |<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
7 ~# t7 n/ l" y7 D7 L/ C" m& {<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
6 N+ v" x2 O* z% y+ `" Z# A<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
! Q' Y9 y  O. o1 ]9 w<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
. b. L; i1 I3 P0 F; b<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
+ R6 ?5 d% I/ F! |; E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
) q+ \/ H. ]% ]6 a7 u% z<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
% @* ?# p# s. m" D<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
  ?+ ?7 f5 C1 X. a6 T<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
3 Y# |$ `! ?% ]1 h" z9 V2 l' ~9 A7 K<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
  v% v3 b# w1 j  I/ I$ U# H<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
9 @7 W6 H4 y8 U<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
$ y  V8 C* q5 [5 F( ]' L<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
1 t8 l! p9 R$ B" Y! x& x+ }<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
! y9 _) T# a9 l7 {' h+ T& o8 A6 [" C<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
- D- f- t. N5 K& k<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
9 B- O% R% u% @: }<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
! X0 p6 o& E$ v<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
& j9 C# R1 F' O! ~% h" q<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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* P: J3 d6 b' E! i/ r. I我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>