【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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* z  R( q' Q8 J, @9 v! I" k" j) i# e+ aThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
% C) @7 P% |: u; LThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
. E! F% r4 ~9 A9 TIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
) p& Q! j9 r% D9 rNothing can compare to my love
( p: b1 B! x8 NCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 O& }% W; ?1 F, eI want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
8 ]* ~* i2 ]5 dI regret not dying
1 V* |' w' Y/ |I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
6 T* M8 ?, |6 M8 M1 H* z, ?/ kIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' [/ ]1 U+ d0 s+ u! lRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
2 b4 H3 Q0 U. n2 \<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
9 x) p+ I& b* H  J: c* s! M<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
% U6 R+ }$ v7 [% p+ R1 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
; f/ ]3 E" D0 B% ]3 [/ _4 N: Y5 D<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
3 ^1 a/ R0 N: B# [4 w6 [<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
8 _5 x$ H& T6 \# }& ~<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
- L6 n3 l+ q1 T) N( I<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
- `6 x/ K" W# ]( ?8 A" v& U<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
9 X6 [9 \1 l  X; {7 N<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
( }" N& p- X7 q4 v6 ~+ p, `<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
8 ^: h! o/ V4 g<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
( [  d9 M  c" p5 _# `<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
& Y8 k& G. `: l0 t6 X' ^* H<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
8 Q+ h! d0 ?6 G# [- }4 {<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
/ p) z& i) e  J<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
% [5 l1 G6 A4 E& U. I1 ~( `<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
3 l( p8 D7 o# }/ e- h7 Q  j4 v<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, D$ S7 J& M; ~: s<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
7 q4 `8 e2 v7 I<P>I regret not dying</P>
  f  T8 ?# Q& r5 _( Y% P+ X7 [<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
- \* S- C6 r$ r<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
6 \) }7 E1 Z$ N<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
0 U. f: G  t6 M0 Z  w<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out
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我请你剖开它
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: s$ r; f7 y4 I# q# f) D2 G5 M; K1 G 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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% u# Y% J4 ]& A6 E0 Y  N' O<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>