【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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歌词我附在后面。
; H- m- O# @- @' wThe moonlight is shining brightly,
7 z/ m, [' P( d( Q* i. W% z2 LMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
; N6 M  u' J! z& cThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
4 O# R2 i0 W. N6 }% t8 BThe sky is happy down to its soul
8 X7 @2 o3 c3 qWith the moon kissing it every night
1 M6 F* ?) v5 P; V( _( USeeing the sky content with its love
' D2 x, e3 h/ L5 Y# oIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 l$ s8 L* D! c* @/ LMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
6 C2 A. Z; o+ L. Z6 Z* D. `Every other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
- ^9 S" G2 |* a) |5 AI love you I love you with all my heart
& x  C$ t8 z( n. J1 h4 P8 kNothing can compare to my love
% Q/ H4 y( P/ g' a" ~Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
1 r8 g6 V$ k- P+ ~The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
5 `7 _2 S: u  b1 C- t. A5 a' P1 lI’m still filled with fear
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
& `4 ^, P" U2 J# J5 }% K% dI regret not dying
* t; g8 c  y! N; }- `4 I- y9 yI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
: i4 v. C+ M; u% u; ^) \1 sYour speech can’t even keep up with it
4 e4 @4 H2 g: ]; X4 PIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
/ g$ ~/ x* P, Y" T( l$ ERambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
' S1 G& q0 b" {0 s( D<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
- s% U) N) O9 e, k' ?  v<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
. w, O) |& ]- }& i  E<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
& E- ?7 _6 T7 ]  Z5 i0 e& B<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
' u: R& u' \6 N, l+ M, O<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
$ A* M/ {6 K' A, |1 J* `<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
; j" p+ a6 A0 o6 A6 i9 ~$ x, c<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
2 l  k8 v  Q/ r8 ]; K0 Q) Z<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
2 b1 d. |! c% {! d  w<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
2 E9 U8 w/ D! k<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
( Z, b! n/ k) E8 |' {<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
7 y# n3 L; _0 N<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
$ y# O9 R6 Z* T7 \<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
/ b  `) M1 S3 S3 l& E+ t; G<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
* q7 I8 g: {2 r* D<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
  r6 U) n, |" Y. J+ {* h<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
4 N  T- X; a) n" v+ n- |7 u- }<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
; y0 w! x, |0 f: E( f6 E<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
; q- ~  T( o+ \, j; r<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
. }) b3 g4 X$ H( ?* Z3 L; {5 K<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
. ]  M5 C' g! _. [; ~<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 z; Y6 Z3 P& s" d1 E' W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
! G* `% @2 d( L, Y7 p<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
7 |2 b* o% z4 D/ c# a<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
, ~" [: t* d8 f8 n, W<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
# g- o1 j8 l" Q) D) }<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
9 @; E' u# h- H( W3 Z1 c4 E$ p( z& Z<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
$ x( h* P& G1 s! p<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
" e0 S  D' [+ l0 [+ ], c: Z* |<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
- m& X% ~# W4 g<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
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gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

0 b  e$ w3 q! d; y" z6 t- o 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>