【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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: p  x6 ]& a3 u7 {歌词我附在后面。
' J0 G* U2 x# t  R3 E, SThe moonlight is shining brightly,
- W6 X  b- `8 M4 p& I7 IMaking the sky glitter like gold,
When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
( Q' O: v/ T! X5 z* r7 |2 ]: P# jThe sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
' K6 R7 ~, T: e2 J9 Q4 a& I0 wSeeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
You needn’t fear anything
6 W% G# p$ U2 t7 F1 CMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
; o5 S% V* |, C* H0 X* p  K% gI really want to know just how much you love me
- \8 d* m* s, D+ kI love you I love you with all my heart
- k& E0 w# A1 ~0 j% i+ \7 d( tNothing can compare to my love
7 J# L4 }, |- w- BCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
1 C! p' o2 k' w' ]I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
, ^8 w8 q( T9 h5 k8 r$ c$ RI’m still filled with fear
) d- ~2 w1 T1 E/ Z7 M6 Z* `$ C& rYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
I regret not dying
' Q9 [+ @* D, MI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
! p9 |7 J- {: M( F2 K9 ]) RYour speech can’t even keep up with it
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
  G8 x2 u6 f4 t/ y# uRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
2 n; R0 I! {3 V# b, c$ J7 [<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
8 f3 e0 }, l7 F: ?1 h5 ^, Z( |<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
5 C3 O- O+ ?$ C  f( y$ P1 g<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
0 O4 Q8 Q) r/ C. D3 o% O! a! X4 `9 ~<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
4 R0 Y6 {8 A6 t; A<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
, V' s# I5 ]& N3 s<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
) [2 Q8 Z  ~# m' s+ P2 T: Z6 H# F<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
( ]" O7 z; k4 `) u6 P3 M# G. p<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
<P>你无需担心</P>
2 h1 s" F% }3 o8 w, l1 [% F6 n( K( L<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
" u% A& M4 z2 g, c/ F+ ?6 i<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
1 P6 C7 k7 }( B% k! R<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
2 d, K2 @7 u. U<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
1 T. d6 t/ E) ?) {2 E<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
5 S# g0 r1 V; t) j<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
+ p# H9 F& K. T3 W3 `. G<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
6 h. D) i+ c% u1 f. ~; U" b# e<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
6 s! R' U  L  v% C. D5 ~0 `2 {<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
, P2 ^4 ^: {% N8 J3 y<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
. R/ ?; i, K  I! H<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
) r* A3 _, \$ r3 O$ O<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
, m% Z- }6 V! b% a# f<P>I regret not dying</P>
6 F9 F6 x: {; h  W1 ~, v$ t<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
" |$ }* q7 H( G+ G/ Q- e<P>I only have one tongue </P>
7 I4 M& N0 j" g" g& `8 X, L! j! j<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
: N  p" Z) h9 Q" e* n; H<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
- i* ^! [5 E  H5 t+ p' u<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
8 L- b9 g. n( A! f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
  @1 a$ k% v1 l* c( d' e, Y<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
# g9 d2 H+ b' |) t. Y+ G<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它
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4 U( Y, @+ q$ p 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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1 g9 ^6 s% a5 G' ]" r& E* ?<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>