【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。

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6 E, i, R; p; ]4 X$ a+ @2 ^歌词我附在后面。
8 F/ A' S1 _1 I/ i! I; v; I2 g' p4 yThe moonlight is shining brightly,
Making the sky glitter like gold,
) W/ z' I: d7 z, V' t1 oWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
0 I3 N  @# S( d$ T4 jThe sky is happy down to its soul
: ?& V; q; q( d* F( B* VWith the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
6 I  K+ x+ O# \: r8 o, rIt fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
  z7 q! y6 k) o0 H% C9 xYou needn’t fear anything
2 ]3 E: s- {6 `2 F0 ?# z" @My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
Every other word you utter is love
0 }: b3 x2 y' RI really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
Nothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
% x2 q- Q' J( u8 z  B' qYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
. d5 B( K3 b/ J; J  ?4 tI regret not dying
% r0 o* {. ?- ?# }3 DI only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
Your speech can’t even keep up with it
  I* E5 L$ B8 d+ Z6 U4 H9 SIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
. E4 s' ~! e$ q" ZRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ y$ w# X  e* O, D% n<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
<P>月光闪亮 </P>
<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
9 B+ Q0 ~! w2 F- @9 ]<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
/ ~1 G! b& J$ A<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
) B0 H" i3 `. Y, C! q<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
* j; g3 A, l% a+ x  |3 h<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
# I9 b* [; \* G# Q<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
' A% x6 w2 z  Z% U# {8 H<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
, D* o3 C" U3 g; G2 r<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
) t8 i; ?4 l4 a4 S9 h<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
% }# r! \/ Z; x6 R, y6 l# Y4 i<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
% p4 A# @$ o" D<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
) ?& U; J  c: v$ L) \<P>你无需担心</P>
<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
% C+ O( ?9 P$ _* t& r<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
4 L( t9 |8 \% c<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
$ y9 \6 L0 X- l+ E" S<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
8 }5 q$ G6 \! ~7 K* s: k" s<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
2 ~+ {2 C& a; X8 w2 w) v<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
4 m- H6 x: q' U3 w<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
! [( A/ H; n( e" n( D* D<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
9 P& {2 a- z; z5 W* A" A0 k<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
3 l3 u! \, O0 u* m/ b% L, W<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
2 y3 O/ X, ?' n3 e9 ]. Q<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 k( W" M3 k2 A<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
% p, i3 a6 C1 f3 U<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
7 z$ c) q. |/ u# A5 Y<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
. h! V0 R( B: s6 d3 @- a<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
/ c) L" O; z% b9 P7 Z& [<P>I regret not dying</P>
( r( T4 z4 [7 W# F$ `<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
3 l( C. D  {" J* h2 ?<P>I only have one tongue </P>
6 [( W. P" M# q3 `! \2 h<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
0 P6 }) h7 n1 B# n/ b/ T8 b<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
- j* ^2 f: z, G+ f<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
, }( X& \( ]% d" A<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
& ^8 i' V2 N7 Y<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
# I: _" M2 _9 L# s5 w9 Z<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
: ^0 l# y9 z. G<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

我请你剖开它

0 R4 A) b, w8 U8 u% E 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>