【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

vichida

翻译大人，正在开始译．带点民歌风味的，又被翻成英文，转了两道手，好像没什么感觉，偶又是音盲．哎，要是懂泰文好些．
袖子亲也来，太好了．这活适合你干．

lily_zl

我们尽力而为就好了。本来就没有最佳翻译一说，只能更精益求精。

aoiwang

主题曲参赛译稿

8 ]9 ^; E/ e, b: n& f* k# jThe only thing I’ve never revealed to you
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
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我想我從未表露出
( Q6 B6 Z6 f* J- K; p( r  K深藏在我心底的那句
+ \, s, a2 W. v7 a我愛你  
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From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
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在遇見你的第一刻
$ q) \, u* U4 [5 n/ q1 Z8 m2 x你已經深深的佔領了
  K" ]2 t& }% {' ], H% G; Z我的心

We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
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縱然朝夕相處
* Z2 X$ J1 f# v  F還是不能肯定你的心意

$ u* ^6 f4 ^5 S( y. g6 BIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
I would probably know how you feel
$ n7 K5 Z$ t7 }  y2 ]: w- @' ]8 e凝視著你的眼
- c8 o8 B/ \/ M2 }! U, T4 n, o9 q搜尋著你的魂
我也許就能了解
1 x: m7 c- x* o你的心情

Love… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

3 M6 R+ E* w3 [+ g  h: V愛  簡單的一句愛
為什麼
如此難以表白?
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% @: ]$ z2 |/ V( V7 m1 HI want to confess that I love you,
But I never did
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愛你 想要告訴你
卻總是說不出來

3 O$ N- G/ T  p, a- [0 A, mOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
/ s+ R* v+ G& u; I: e( @" h) @$ j也許有一天
你將從我指間滑漏

* B  @+ G" M2 ^9 xIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
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1 h, O/ b! T2 F+ G; l( i3 P希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
我心底的秘密

4 m* x  p+ D" W  S1 R7 QI don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away

7 o: w6 S1 t. ]& N% G. K/ U$ |, M不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝
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Can I entrust it to you?
# v, @3 i6 w: F" G  i( c9 y/ EEntrust my love within your heart
可否讓我托付給你?
% c$ i8 {: R4 p; j* n' I; v9 d托付我的愛
- o7 }* R: \: G9 M  Q. ~+ P收在你心裡

, ?' u: W* I5 W$ W8 L; rLove… just the word love
Why is it so difficult to express?

1 T2 P2 U: p3 M6 D8 b* B6 d愛  簡單一句愛
- ?  m5 C  \8 V4 }為什麼如此難以表白?
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I want to confess that I love you,
1 [* M+ W7 |7 u+ i+ W, S. [' b7 A$ vBut I never did

  \# `* o6 P7 W愛你 我想要告訴你
卻還是說不出來

One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
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也許有一天
8 j% ?% X3 S- o你將從我指間滑漏

* W6 k) n( D" pIf today isn’t too late,
& h! F2 h6 S9 EI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess

3 g& T& N7 {3 `2 f  L1 ?" \希望今天還不會太晚
讓我向你表白
6 j  d: k; Q6 D7 _! l9 p- p我心底的秘密
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I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
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, [% T# q/ G2 B2 ?% P( N不要讓我的深情 隨風而逝

Can I entrust it to you?
' z# Z, R6 ?7 g+ L; u4 U+ }( uEntrust my love within your heart

; o: P6 h1 Z& A2 b# h! c8 }, [可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛
# ?' V6 v) n. p收在你心裡

6 R! D7 T1 O3 b1 P% ICan I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
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( @1 i# d, B& p6 X% V7 D+ Y8 b+ j" T! [可否讓我托付給你?
托付我的愛 收在你心裡
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1 F/ p- C& o5 H3 B8 v  r对唱曲参赛译稿

The moonlight is shining brightly,
" X+ ^* _! R. u$ q6 ?/ K4 ~Making the sky glitter like gold,
5 I0 K2 ?/ n2 f. e! l- J) IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness

0 V7 m/ B- Q4 Y% u皎潔月光下
& t9 w) R# u$ H6 G; R天空金銀閃爍
) U) Q8 h8 R8 y凝視著星空
我心充滿快樂
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The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
The sky is happy down to its soul
With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
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+ P8 C; @' J! D7 P6 C4 |: h月光映在我的眼底
月夜陪著我一起沉醉
& w; a* e) p- o月光輕吻著夜幕
星空充滿著歡樂
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0 H) }  `9 \7 J, }+ X6 @* EIt fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour

我心卻充斥著憂鬱
害怕我們的愛
) o- k, M  @, {. N0 x3 m; \* a終將逝去

+ T$ U5 b: J5 R' a  q# VYou needn’t fear anything
% u3 C. D* y! Y; ]My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily

你勿須擔心憂鬱
我心充滿著歡欣
2 X! m1 }9 [/ e8 G( A- U5 A愛你
堅定不渝

Every other word you utter is love
3 x* j: }6 f" Q! BI really want to know just how much you love me
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( I+ C+ c. t) |* s+ Q, y8 F你的一言一語都是愛
我真的想知道你到底愛我多少

I love you I love you with all my heart
) y- w" @1 M- t/ \Nothing can compare to my love
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我的愛 全心全意
你要知道 我的愛無與倫比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
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. }  R/ y5 ^1 D% {7 C8 U1 f能覆蓋半個天空嗎?

The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
; C4 J+ \$ W" Z7 K+ z整個天空 也不及我一半的愛
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I want so much to see inside your heart

我想看透你的心
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8 y) a; f9 U, ~" ~/ y8 AI invite you to rip it out
/ P) S* U( ?: F; u: HTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
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9 o% y& p! h7 @" q6 X& z我歡迎你將它打開
我願意用生命
來證明我的愛
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4 a- m, S0 |3 u( ?' a" u4 A" B# oI’m still filled with fear
# ?' J* \! e% p- R1 V) l# [Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues

9 U& a) Q8 K3 Q9 [8 N# S我依然滿心憂鬱
% z$ [( A% ~9 E' x5 z你千百張口 銀般閃爍的巧語

7 s0 r2 N$ ~+ q8 K) Q' xI regret not dying
I only have one tongue
) @% w. f2 m9 ]It’s nothing close to 100,000

可惜我未能以死證明
' N' k) i" d$ v: ^2 V我只有一張口
遠遠不及千萬
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7 a* [; W& p# z2 J4 I$ y. P3 uWith such a tongue as yours,
3 {; N+ f+ y9 d5 Q1 s% @Your speech can’t even keep up with it

這樣一張巧舌
7 |" G, X5 B4 G9 J4 h' `你的言語都跟不上
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If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
- u+ k/ S9 ~) A( o$ u- [' Q如果我真有千百張口
) ~4 Q4 x1 F4 T% h/ T1 s0 |我將對你訴說
千萬個心思

2 }; ~! V, v/ }3 x+ l0 l1 i; rRambling on about a thousand words of love
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訴說千萬個
愛的心思

杏花疏影

对唱歌感觉是民歌小调，很热烈，很难译。就民歌风格来说（不知道是不是真的是民歌），要比流行歌讲究对仗，并且隐喻很多，个人感觉对唱的这一首翻译难度比主题曲大。话说这首对唱歌可真热烈啊，呵呵！也向对楼主说 ...
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 03:11

' ]' [" d. l, H是啊，不知对唱歌词有没有俚语在里面。

vichida

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒