【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
xxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

: ^5 B! w$ r; x- O  i; d0 B一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
4 ^- D7 f, F2 A1 a9 w6 H* r0 E% bvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

8 R; H8 u0 N7 g  |6 H) B再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

1 E2 [' L6 x7 kThe moonlight is shining brightly,
皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
  |$ [- d* Z/ m3 G# Y& rMaking the sky glitter like gold,
夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
凝视明月 我心欢畅
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
- c- X& {  ]% v3 e月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
1 ~+ `8 F- r/ K( M  a一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
" `+ N1 u; w# SSeeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
& ?! N9 F8 n$ {3 g5 kIt fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
0 N7 Y# e. h* uYou needn’t fear anything
# c2 O! z4 {" l9 ~3 e1 {: _  x怕这怕那 又是何苦
3 I. u' y8 n: zMy love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
/ m. B  {+ X% V; i# F5 @Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
9 l- ]  q9 w  U4 C3 o1 K- [真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
I love you I love you with all my heart
& W! i# m) e/ c& d) a爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
世间万物  皆不能比

Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
9 p6 ~6 Q1 s- e- F能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
. \0 I5 _2 w1 u  V- g. R  I整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
I want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
+ D, R% {# x4 L# q2 Q. O9 Y你尽管把它掏去
To prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
9 B' s: W) v: d2 f) `I’m still filled with fear
可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
- \5 t# Z5 ]; L1 ^你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
$ O  G0 h/ S' A! M/ \6 ~. WI regret not dying
9 }* I  W$ X2 K" I4 F; `真恨不能 以死明志
I only have one tongue
1 u6 \7 C, s0 O1 p, K  ~; p9 U# N( B我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
It’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
With such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
% ]2 I. H' b0 n5 ]; y& y/ PYour speech can’t even keep up with it
能说会道 无以伦比
2 _2 K- x3 F4 c# DIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
' Q! E4 R$ l5 E  M3 q8 O若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
Rambling on about a thousand words of love
* m" U  p9 l7 ?0 N; x向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
4 m# j3 y$ U0 d& i从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
. i2 s& `7 r+ g; D; d爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
From the first moment we met,
对你一见倾心
. R2 q% V; ~5 t' B3 i3 u" Y1 q7 qI already loved you with all my heart
2 Z9 a: X' K4 {8 N从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
2 }/ [3 x# D4 o3 z# k) b你我每天见面寒暄
3 t# H, V$ |4 c& O! b4 J* h! q6 p% XBut we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
奈何从未谈及内心
If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
! f" Z5 i# c! p  K2 tI would probably know how you feel
! x% [) @6 ~" O4 j5 e, D或能知你心意
, Z5 f' U8 h3 k# [9 b% j& o  V- ]Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
( v1 J9 _' {+ a* G! J/ a% j3 Y+ cWhy is it so difficult to express?
" _  b( @$ z1 D+ P为何如此难言？
8 U/ K9 A) b9 b3 i/ k8 E5 KI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
' H, h$ ?$ Q1 d2 c! P" s: l却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
If today isn’t too late,
. V4 w6 U7 x2 V假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) c  o) b( C, A) ?4 q$ u今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
$ f( I& P' w. C2 @/ Z不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去
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Love… just the word love
' ~0 p' O7 J) i- O! R4 q0 T. Y爱呀，爱就一个字
9 p6 @+ D( P3 k1 A; B. tWhy is it so difficult to express?
2 ~7 L; Z& e8 q* L3 U  n为何如何难言？
I want to confess that I love you,
* M% D( ?- N0 Z$ L* o我多想向你表白
But I never did
却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
$ b1 y2 C4 _6 G; F+ e2 p! k1 C只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
4 b& x8 d7 L4 e0 fIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
, D2 T9 `/ Q% r; z* PI want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
/ Q( N3 g- b* ^* ]I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去
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: X2 D8 z, m7 {1 q' n& CCan I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
* h/ X8 g; ?9 B: Q8 L6 q6 Q0 q0 C, U从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
1 s$ m& y  P7 x8 K老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
- O7 D; j4 ]0 D1 O% y刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
: o& g! N* L  C1 z! F( ^* [老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
* ~, L8 M" n/ H刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
! v, v, y- N8 Z" n0 Gvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

3 ^! `2 _+ }0 ^( R/ `+ a. ~不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。