【08.11.01】 歌词翻译大奖赛公告（参赛视频18、19楼）(比赛结果已公布～）

杏花疏影

老大：感觉“like 100 silver tongues ”差不多就象俚语。怎么没见老大的译作？期待！......
( \9 T5 y; ?+ g: w; I% rxxiuzi 发表于 2009-1-1 10:04

9 T) l/ N# g' l6 Y8 G5 a  u一个月前我译了一半，旅游回来再看，自己都看不过去，索性丢在一边。还是欣赏你们的吧。

杏花疏影

哦呀，你们都贴在这里，偶昨晚贴在那个歌词的帖子后面了。老大，谢谢提醒
2 P% Y4 ~- {2 M- v! Y! U$ g% uvichida 发表于 2009-1-1 09:20

再贴到这里来呀。

vichida

比赛歌曲2：男女对唱

The moonlight is shining brightly,
, t( L9 B: V% l皎洁明月当空 光华闪耀
, @' D8 d5 ~# j5 bMaking the sky glitter like gold,
2 d6 @, e& r  Q$ n夜空仿若镀金 炫目灿烂

9 L$ F9 Q/ y* d" P3 DWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
: C  G3 v$ H1 t" {凝视明月 我心欢畅
; U- P& t$ U, rThe moon is shining brightly in my eyes
2 O0 M" u  r0 q# t* u7 W月光闪烁 在我眼中
The sky is happy down to its soul
一片丹心 照耀夜空
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With the moon kissing it every night
看那月亮  夜夜亲吻天空
Seeing the sky content with its love
夜空安详  沉浸柔情之中
It fills my heart with worry      I fear our love will turn sour
我的心却忧虑惶恐 爱到浓时 可会发酵变味
" w! B! ^$ P' R& L* s' tYou needn’t fear anything
! ^9 O+ I2 P& `5 _5 \怕这怕那 又是何苦
My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
) \% m3 E; I+ p我的爱坚定不移 定让人幸福满溢
Every other word you utter is love
口口声声 说你爱我
I really want to know just how much you love me
$ G3 k1 d/ X& ?" {  F: y真想知道爱的分量 几两几斤
! s' T3 r+ v4 v/ [. g. XI love you I love you with all my heart
爱你爱你 全心全意
Nothing can compare to my love
) ?% I3 n& N7 W2 z5 o1 z) g( I世间万物  皆不能比

5 Q9 ^, F5 E( s+ Q! |# vCan it even fill up half the sky, P’?
能装满半个天空吗,我的情哥哥？
6 [" V) s6 F6 j" HThe whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
整个天空 也盛不住我半份浓情
7 o4 x9 z# x9 B8 KI want so much to see inside your heart
我真想看透你的心
I invite you to rip it out
你尽管把它掏去
! @7 `4 r3 s/ S$ f0 d# uTo prove my love, I’m willing to die
若能证明我爱你 没了性命也不可惜
# u) I! e( Z+ |: J0 o8 gI’m still filled with fear
/ n6 F# A# J7 J- O% p& b# l可我依然满心忧虑
Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
; K8 y5 @9 {4 B8 O8 v+ p: ^你随口花言巧语 若有银舌百张
I regret not dying
真恨不能 以死明志
& K  w' k; J! WI only have one tongue
( h" k8 Q6 Q3 w0 o* L# t我笨嘴拙舌 只得一张
" k# E" D8 u7 DIt’s nothing close to 100,000
也恨不得  多如千万
% h% }) Z0 [' w8 h7 gWith such a tongue as yours,
你这张嘴 真真厉害
# ?: b, B2 R: J' R( n& WYour speech can’t even keep up with it
* A! G; F4 V0 X% j. J+ b% o+ U能说会道 无以伦比
If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
5 R3 g6 M4 y3 j4 [8 v/ N4 ^0 w若我真有巧舌百张 定要滔滔不绝
, ^8 X4 o, p/ N% m; Q( mRambling on about a thousand words of love
2 O! f0 _# ?5 _9 c9 g" Y4 }向你倾诉千言万语 道尽绵绵情话

vichida

比赛歌曲一：主题曲
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The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
从未向你吐露衷情
That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
爱你是我唯一深藏的秘密
" T+ S( g9 W6 v+ f5 hFrom the first moment we met,
) i8 L+ q* f$ V# {" ?对你一见倾心
I already loved you with all my heart
" `6 \: L9 `6 K1 T3 B从此别无他意
We meet and talk everyday,
& s  Z& o$ C5 m6 M  Y你我每天见面寒暄
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
" B0 @( i! J. v( D/ \- t- B奈何从未谈及内心
2 z2 l* M* W5 l* ~6 N/ R. x. IIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
若能凝视你双眼 探入你灵魂
I would probably know how you feel
8 h) l% a! H+ M& ?+ \( I7 r1 U" i或能知你心意
4 v1 v6 y$ W! Z) HLove… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
7 U% w1 |! j) f7 t4 |& e; C3 ^1 x: PWhy is it so difficult to express?
为何如此难言？
3 J0 @, ^0 G3 Z  X1 ?1 j4 M2 K  s$ vI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
But I never did
+ J1 B( ]2 F6 i+ k8 }却始终未曾出口
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
& M  s7 A. }% RIf today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
) _: e& }3 r  {+ p. Y0 C( P0 Z# R今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
" s3 C# x# @! c/ [# x" E- }不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
; n( K7 y$ E8 H可否将它 托付于你?
Entrust my love within your heart
, u6 p& O; l, m- l从此安放在你心里 哪儿也不去

Love… just the word love
爱呀，爱就一个字
; o2 l: R) A8 J# ^9 u. dWhy is it so difficult to express?
- G+ g" i' A2 ?/ p为何如何难言？
" z% c9 m: A% a5 pI want to confess that I love you,
我多想向你表白
. A0 h# z1 Q1 u  C$ B) K, b4 IBut I never did
却始终未曾出口
7 k7 x+ O" [, H9 ^( POne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
只怕有天你从我指缝中溜走
7 x( B2 m6 B# H) W  @If today isn’t too late,
假如还不太迟
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
! C2 K. ?% p: k* v# ^: u! |/ _# M5 t今天我要向你坦诚 长萦心中 缕缕情思
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
不愿这份爱 逝如流水
Can I entrust it to you?
" g0 b- H; q$ s可否将它 托付于你？
Entrust my love within your heart
" w' X$ h6 h' ~" r  ~5 z从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

Can I entrust it to you?
可否将它托付于你？
5 [+ y+ D( w  w. H: Z( j8 u& g' R0 S8 oEntrust my love within your heart
) \, x5 m7 W  p' i7 j! P从此安放在你心里，哪儿也不去

vichida

41# 杏花疏影
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
% z! @0 B' |# [1 d8 W  p* ^7 C刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～

杏花疏影

“这个易吟唱其实要比主题曲还难把握，感觉韵似乎必须押，译词的长短也得基本合”，偶也有同感。我想大家翻译的第一首歌应该相差不大，但是到了第二首，就很有看头了。

杏花疏影

41# 杏花疏影  
老大，你还是参与吧，别尽忽悠别人。偶也学习学习，翻译的东西就要各有各的译法比较着才好玩。
刚仔细看了一些比赛规则，要12月31日晚8点截至，偶们都好像过期了～～～
vichida 发表于 2009-1-1 10:38

& N. d2 }# M. I$ e不碍事，偶们表慢...

lily_zl

太好了，我旅游回来看到大家的译作，满心欢喜。谢谢你们的支持。后续的会跟上的。